It's time for another critique! I'll be looking through both level 1 & 2.
I’ll be looking through your rhythm quick sketches and giving some advice on how you can use rhythms more effectively to get more dynamic drawings.
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Patrick Alexander Büchi
4d
Last but not least, 6 rhythms after the critiques! I'd say that I lack confidence the most, the messy lines make the drawing seem dirty/chaotic, though in the last two poses I'm quite happy with the result!
Any kind of critique is very much welcome, I'd love to know your opinion. :^)
Tommy Pinedo
22d
Found a great video on Brent Eviston gesture drawing on proko YouTube channel. I’ve used what I learned doing this practice and from the video and tried it using the reference.
here is the link to that video!
https://youtu.be/s9TcEZIXSLI?si=RLPLmfH_CENTppc6
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21d
Such a great video, thanks for sharing! And great job implementing the principles that he covered.
pinkfin
26d
hello! This project was SO hard for me. I have tried to do this for a while, been not liking the result and everything i drew seemed so wrong to me. i watched critique video, tried again and still all my drawings seemed so stiff? I've been stuck on this project for 2 months now had art block because been not happy with my drawings. I'm so lost but still i really don't want to be stuck on this project for more time then i already had been. I drew this pose just to ask for help. Please guide me i would really like to know what i can work on more, if i'm going in right direction. Will be really thankful for the help!
Tommy Pinedo
22d
Honestly, I think it looks quite good! I sense a unique style to it and I feel the gesture flow. What I like to do is if I feel like I’ve been doing the exercise for a while, I’ll move on to the next lesson and come back to gesture maybe days or weeks later.
for example, I’m doing gesture right now and I went back to do the “learn how to sketch” video again and I notice my sketching lines doing that exercise improved. I had the post demo attempt a month ago and compared it to now and I saw improvement. I hope that made sense and helped!
Tommy Pinedo
1mo
More gestures that I did. Did 5 minutes per pose. After doing 50 gestures I’m starting to get a better idea of gestures.
I looking forward to perspective next! :)
Alex Jin
1mo
I really enjoy doing these! Wonder if I add too much detail. I could probably push the poses further and go without pure reference
Tommy Pinedo
1mo
These are my new attempts after watching the level 1, 2 and critique. I’ve been doing these for a few days now and it’s tough.
I’ve noticed when I start this exercise, my first couple of gestures are bad lol. I’m gonna continue doing these. Any feedback is welcome :)

Agnieszka
2mo
These lessons gave me a lot. The ebook, demos, and critiques were all so useful. Before taking the basic drawing course, I studied gestures from Figure Drawing Fundamentals, but now I understand it much better and feel more confident. Thank you so much for these lessons, and I can't wait to start the new topic about perspective!
Janou Baarda
10d
Amazing work!
Alex Jin
1mo
I think you do a great job of keeping your gesture drawing clean and truly gestural. I catch myself adding/starting with too much detail. While I think I eventually get to an accurate weight and feel in my poses, I like how you can usually tell with your line variety which lines are the intended rhythm lines in each pose very simply. Its a better foundation to be able to push the pose.
Chauncey Holder
3mo
After Applying what I learned, it really help I understand it a bit more of catching rhythms. I struggled a lot
Chauncey Holder
3mo
Some more I did

@goobish
4mo
drawings done based on the examples in the demo trying to make sure the flow is able to go from limb to limb.

Jack H
6mo
Did another set of 10 drawings. This one was a mixed bag. Some drawings looked good, such as 4 or the hand on 10. But others were simply lacking, such as 1. I still have a long way to go before I'm able to be satisfied with the majority of the drawings I put down, but for now, it's fun to have the little moments where I try and land on a shape that I quite like, like the pointing hand in 10.
Zander Schmer-Lalama
7mo
After watching the rhythm critique I think I have a bit of understanding, but I still need some help. The center line for some pose is hard for me to either jot down or I’m sure how to put down. I also can help but feel like the poses I did(sorry I tried to download the reference photos but they will not for some reason) feel stiff and not alive. I really need someone’s help on this. @Proko anyone on the team I’d appreciate your help! This is some I really want/need to improve upon.

@faegbc
8mo
Some attempts today after having watched the demos and critiques yesterday, took me around an hour and a half for these. I think my first attempts before watching were a little too focused on the literal lines and with making things make sense in my own head, with these I just tried to be quicker, and more focused on the "flow," of things in a more general sense. I think as a result they look sloppier, but also a bit more dynamic? Hard to say. There are definitely some parts I find consistently difficult, like putting in the deltoid in a way that doesn't make things feel segmented like lego people.
Stefan Sharkov
8mo
My third attempt drawing the 24 poses after watching the demo, critique, and reading the e-book. All of the poses were drawn in ~7 minutes for a combined total of around 3 hours. I felt more confident in my rhythms the further I progressed, and I am happy with these results. I will definitely incorporate this exercise into my practices. Critiques would be appreciated.
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8mo
These are super nice gestures!

May Berry
1yr
After the critique. Will eventually get around to enrolling in the figure drawing course.
Stefan Sharkov
8mo
You're doing a good job in finding the rhythms between body parts. I'd suggest exaggerating some of those rhythms. Some of your drawings are looking a little stiff, like #19. Just keep that exaggeration in mind next time, and your rhythms will look way more dynamic.
Zach Pipher
1yr
Thank you Stan for answering my question. I took a short break to finish up my degree and I am very grateful and surprised to see that I made it into your video. Your explanation makes total sense and I was having some frustrations with trying to understand the concept about being "flow-y and also keeping proportions correct, my mind was having trouble comprehending how those could both exist at the same time and the critique have given me confidence to attempt the lesson now and catch back up to where we're at in the course. I have enjoyed the course so far and I hope to be able to continue to appreciate my time as a student.
loes roos
1yr
I have been practicing. Started with the warming ups while watching, then did a whole bunch of drawings from the ebook (Great book!) and then did several poses twice... or more. 3 to 4 minutes. Used the overhand mostly... Did also 30 minute session on 2 minutes for the naked models in live action but found it was too fast. I am way out of shape. Will have to redo that with 5 minutes and post later. But probably need to screenshot the models to compare better later.
Stefan Sharkov
8mo
These are great studies. I think I'll try your process, it sounds very substantial. My advice would be to keep an eye out for not drawing over the same rhythm more than once. Some of your sketches are becoming cluttered by too many attempts at capturing the rhythm. This is some strong work, keep it up.
loes roos
1yr
For anyone wanting to do more practice: There is a great website called https://line-of-action.com and you can choose your time of figure study and it will give you poses of either equal times (your choice and can be 5 min) or of class mode with 30 seconds warm ups, to 1 minute working up to the 10 minute pose... You can fill in quite a bit on the type of model (female, male or random) and the time for your class can be from 30 minutes to 6 hours!!!
Never gets boring!
loes roos
1yr
Now proko has its own timing tool... I like it.

oluchi
1yr
thanks a lot!
loes roos
1yr
Because I was doing Inktober very intensively, I am a bit behind in this course. I decided to do a binge watch the two demos and the critiques and warm up with drawing along a few, but look forward to doing this week loads of rhythms in the poses...
I started figure drawing when I was 18, and my teacher forced me to do 1 or 2 minutes with a 10 inch brush of black paint (on A2 paper) (30 years ago) so I would forget to focus on the details.... I would draw people on the market in Mozambique... but certainly not weekly. With some friends here in Panama, about 12 years ago, we had a model that was pregnant, weekly for 7 months.. those were a lot of drawings but I did not keep it up. Let me see, so I am a bit scared!
Let me see that after doing the exercises I am going to look up those old sketches of the pregnant lady and see how I have progressed.
I do not think I ever realized so well what rhythms and gesture was about! Thanks for the lessons so far. Now it is drawing time! By the weekend I hope to post my results.
And I do not agree that digital should be as fast as normal drawing... I struggle in digital due to the smaller size of my ipad... and on the computer because I am drawing on a flat wacom tablat and seeing the screen... And I do not have the digital miles yet.... I do have pencil miles, although fewer with the overhand.
Brandon
1yr
Hey stan sorry for being a demanding student in different courses, will you talk about how to draw sphere in perspective in the next session? coz i m trying to draw the head in perspective and it aint working... i guess my sphere is wrong and check some online resource but they seem to be too technical
Smartlin
1yr
Thank you Stan for your critique. I will go practice for thousand times more.
Ever since I discovered Proko and this course, I started to feel maybe one day my dream of being able to paint anything I like would come true. Drawing is the stepping stone! And now doing the assignment and practicing drawing is my method of mental recovery after a day of busy work.
I respects you, Marshall, and Jeff. You not only teach drawing knowledge, but also try to help us beginner seeing a bigger picture.
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