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Jack H
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14d
added comment inProject - Notan Master Thumbnails
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L1 and L2 projects. This was quite a challenging project for me. For me, I think I struggled balancing between choosing the proper shapes and covering the small shapes with a single shade. I wonder if the size of the thumbnail was too small?
I did L2 of a still-life I found online. I was pleasantly surprised at how the positive shapes and negative shapes created by the shades could actually capture the form of the fruits, even without any contours. But it still needs work.
Any feedback/critique will be greatly appreciated, thanks!
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13d
These look really good! You did an awesome job focusing on the big, abstract shapes of value while ignoring detail. The fruit thumbnail is my favorite because of its simplicity. It’s a solid Notan study.
Here’s a couple of tips I made for other students. This is one of my favorite Proko assignments so far. I like to think about this exercise like I’m building a puzzle. Consider how they whole composition fits together to build a solid thumbnail.
Overall, awesome job. Keep it up!
Jack H
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17d
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Level 1 and Level 2 projects. I think I did okay for level 1, but level 2 was a bit tricky as I noticed I tend to shade number 2 darker than usual, and certain values were flipped/too similar to each other. I wonder what's the proper way to improve at this? Or is it just intuition, like "value 6 should be this color, value 4 this color, etc."?
For lv 2, I cut a square out of another piece of paper to cover and isolate the individual squares. Order was also randomized. Would appreciate any feedback/advice on this, thanks!
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17d
This is an exercise to train your eye and hand dexterity. The Level 2 is especially difficult because you can’t compare the values to each around it.
I think you did pretty good for such a difficult assignment.
Something you could try to make it easier is to have a gradient scale next to where you’re drawing. Try to match your squares to the gradient as you go.
Train your eye to see the values and it will get easier with practice.
Jack H
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18d
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Back after a month's break and time to start on value. Value is one of my greatest weaknesses so I'm excited to dive in to improve my skills. This warmup was nice and relaxing, though I'm still trying to figure out the best way to shade consistently.