Rachel Dawn Owens
Virginia USA
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Phil H
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Drawing Basics - Lines - Project - Organizing Line Weight
I enjoyed this a lot. I couldn't resist the opportunity to use pen.
Hierarchy of Importance - Drawn on tracing paper with Sakura Pigma Micron 01 (0.25mm) and 08 (0.5mm).
Light and Shadow - Drawn on tracing paper with a Tombow Fudenosuke Brush Pen - Hard.
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This looks great!
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Keep going! Make more iterations to try to simplify more! These are great so far.
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This was a lot more difficult than I thought. The first two drawings were from observation and the third one was from imagination.
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These are really fun drawings and I love your reference. You did great simplifying the strange little critter. You could probably even take the simplification a step further on the the head. I love how you drew the bony hands.
I love the pose that you went for. He still looks like a primate although his ears may have gotten a bit to big and his arms too skinny.
I went over your work with my own drawings. Mostly because I also wanted to draw a Tarsier.
Hope this helps.
Thanks for sharing and keep going!
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A quick tip for this melted pancake assignment:
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This one could be helpful too. Not sure if it’s mentioned in the video. But this little thing can add some extra dimension to y’alls drawings.
@josesal11
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This assignment was really fun but and any feedback would be greatly appreciated. I think went over ten shapes though with the buffalo unfortunately.
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Nice work simplifying the animals. Keep it going and try some more iterations to push your designs further
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Here, I applied the pancake method to different landscapes, experimenting with form modifications and adding variety. It’s been a lot of fun discovering interesting spaces! Below, you’ll find the more polished versions.
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These are SO COOL
@Anubhav Saini for your Art Club poster design, you could try to find some professionals for reference to start. This is a website I like to browse through sometimes for stuff like this: https://www.designspiration.com
Pay attention to how the designers use illustration to support the typography. You want a poster to grab people’s attention and be easily readable in the first 3 seconds of viewing.
Just bumping up the contrast around “Bad Art Club” text can bring it forward from the background and add a little extra punch.
Hope this helps. Good luck with your club!
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Blobs gone mad...
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Wow! Super cool
@magnumexpress
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First attempts at gesture in over a month, and first time uploading any. The Yoni and Sekaa poses were 30 seconds each, and the (5) Marcia poses were 1 minute each. Any critiques or tips would be very much appreciated.
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These are so good! I can see your hand getting warmed up. You nailed those poses on the last page. Keep it up!
Mr. Renso
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Day 12.
I decided to not use any reference, and instead I sketched a knight (that kinda looks like Modred from Fate/Apocrypta iykyk).
So far I have enjoyed every aspect of this "challenge", as I managed to not overthink and just draw. I have also spotted both my strengths and shortcomings, without putting much pressure onto me.
Can't wait to continue the lessons!
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Sick character
