Rachel Dawn Owens
Richmond, Virginia USA
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Marisa Del Campo
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added comment inProject - Simplify to CSI
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I seem to always do a few lines on top of each other trying to get the shape or proportion I want, and then end up with thick lines that I have to erase. Need to get in the habit of doing really light lines and ghosting more. The boots took three tries! All part of the process though.
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It gets easier with practice. You’re on the right track!
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My attempts.
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Wow! Very strong work. Don’t be afraid to loosen up a little more.
Christian Peitler
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This was more difficult than expected for me, feedback is welcome :)
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You did great on this assignment! I love the long, loose marks. It doesn’t look like you got stuck on any unnecessary details and I dig that you exaggerated the shapes.
You could make the forms look a little more structured with some straight lines too. Add more variety of curved or straight lines.
Hope this helps:
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Went too small, awkward, and cramped on the first pass. Second attempts after watching the demo.
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nice improvement!
Neo Diamond
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Really enjoyed this one. Felt really daunting at the start but I feel like I have a good grip in the concept now. Any feedback would be appreciated.
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These look awesome! These are well balanced and cohesive figure studies.
The hands and feet get a little small on certain ones but that’s just a minor thing.
Tommy Pinedo
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Here are my level 1 attempts drawing the ginger references and seal references from the gesture pack from promo :) I hope I’m doing these right.
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You got it! The cross contours look correct to me.
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The delicate mark making and value control looks great here.
Spent some time studying feet this week after being inspired by Micheal Hampton.
This was great practice. I struggle with feet sometimes and now I understand them just a little bit more.
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This is a great place to start! You did a nice job separating the values into shapes and I really appreciate the way you drew out your values on the side of the page.
The biggest issue I have here is the reference. This is a lovely photo of a lemon, but the light sources are confusing for this assignment.
Lighting the lemon with a single strong light source (like a desk lamp) would be the best way to photograph this.
It will help your study and you will get more out of this assignment.
Hope this helps. Keep it up 👍
