Critique - Learning to Sketch from Imagination

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Critique - Learning to Sketch from Imagination

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Stan Prokopenko
It’s time for level 2 critiques! Let’s take a look through your “Learning to Sketch from Imagination” projects and talk about some of the common mistakes.
Newest
Christopher Lebreault
Hey! Here is my 2nd attempted at this assignment (technicality 2nd and 3rd) I am have a hard time grasping the "messy" line part of this project. I draw through, look for rhythms and shapes, etc. but i have a strong habit of drawing "clean lines" if I see a mistake (line not where they are supposed to go or got a shape wrong, a proportion error i noticed) I will go in and correct it. Maybe I am misunderstanding and my sketches are what the assignment is looking for or maybe I am not getting something. the first two rabbit pages are studying refs, the 3rd it exploring and the last rabbit is my final. the two jackal pages are self explanatory. In this assignment I tried my hardest to be messy/exploratory and not concerned with rightness so I included a "sketch" i did while having fun with level 1 to show what my usual sketches look like
Melanie Scearce
Hello! I understand the urge to be "careful" with your lines, but for this exercise the point is to be exploratory and sketch a lot. Your drawings demonstrate that you did just that! You found some really cool shapes, especially with the rabbits. Great job! The point of keeping loose and messy is to help you find the gesture and movement of the pose, so I think you could benefit from working more on the military jackal. He is very stiff -- which, makes sense for his character, but maybe you could find a really cool curve that conveys the same stiffness in a more complex, dynamic pose? Just a suggestion, I think you did an awesome job with these. For this exercise, I think it's okay to play with proportions -- push them until they break, and if they do, you can try another sketch, another idea :) Have fun!
Shreyans
2mo
Tried on a Pangolin after watching the demo and critique. Looked for the main feature and the idea it was giving. I think I'm happy with the results. Would appreciate any help or advice given. Edit: spelling
@arthiecio
2mo
Tried to make Indiana Jones but I thought he was too much of a scared animal so made beni gabor
Isaiah
3mo
👋🙂 Watched the critiques, refined the approach🙌.
Angiev
1mo
Love em too great job!
Thieum
3mo
I love it! Again a great job!
Spirited
3mo
I did another sketch from imagination exercise after watching the critique and realizing some of the mistakes I made in the initial practice! Fun exercise! Larger creature on final page is the final sketch
@josephl
4mo
Jack Mills
4mo
This is probably my favourite imagination drawing so far. I had fun playing around with this cowboy snake concept.
Agnieszka
4mo
This was the hardest exercise for me so far. Actually, it's the reason why I bought this course. I always drew from observation, but when I tried to draw from imagination, I felt paralyzed. I just couldn't do it and didn't know what to do. After watching the demo and critique, I finally understood that I just had the wrong approach. It's still difficult, but I feel like I'm on the right path. Proko's words that drawing from imagination is actually drawing from memory really helped me.
Jack H
4mo
3rd try of drawing from imagination. Decided to do a scorpion, which has more structure and easier to tackle than something like a koala, which is more difficult, in my opinion. I kept in mind the advice of staying loose and exploring the different shapes, and hopefully the results show that. I'm quite happy about how the final scorpion turned out. I'd probably would've never came up with a round body like that if I didn't let my mind wander and explore the possibilities. It was a fun and challenging exercise!
Agnieszka
4mo
Love it! I can feel loose energy in your lines! Keep going
@manuela
4mo
Some exploration of the peacock!
Agnieszka
4mo
Beautiful!
Chauncey Holder
After Criqutue
Stefan Sharkov
Great sketches. your explorations are solid, just keep your line more loose.
@darkmatter323
Here is my second attempt at the level 2 assignment
Stefan Sharkov
Your combination is very creative. My only critique would lie in your linework. Try keeping you lines more loose; it is a sketch after all. Great work so far.
@darkmatter323
Here is my first attempt at the level 2 assighnment
Stefan Sharkov
These sketches look great, and I love your story-telling with the octopus chef as well as seeing your process. Nice work so far.
Giovanni Mackie
Here what did and what I can improve of what could have drawing Rabbit. How do fine shape of the body and the head of the rabbit?
Stefan Sharkov
These are good sketches. The shapes you used are fairly close; I would have used a rounded triangle for the head. One thing to look out for when drawing the fur is the "saw-blade problem, where your fur looks like the teeth of a saw rather than fur. Try keeping the fur pointing toward the direction it is flowing, as well as varying the sizes of the triangles to avoid symmetry. Nice work so far.
Stefan Sharkov
I made two attempts with this assignment. First, I tried to create my own owl character, then I tried a rooster. I think I did a good job on keeping loose during the exploration phase, but I did go back and put a final graphite linework on the owl design. Feedback would be appreciated.
Patrick Bosworth
These are great sketches Stefan! I really love how you exaggerated the rooster crowing! Excellent sense of movement and a great expression! Keep up the great explorations!
Chantel Brockmann
Got a little unhinged
Stefan Sharkov
Very fun design. I can also see your loose sketch underneath the finals lines. I would like to see the reference for this drawing. Nice job.
@gibble
6mo
I had fun exploring but also found it challenging. Will add this assignment to my daily routine.
Stefan Sharkov
Great exploration and final design. I'd say try to be more loose with your sketches, but your doing a good job already.
Giorgi Karkuzashvili
Was fun to explore this guy. 3 main refs, lil explorations with red pencil and the final big beaver guy
Giorgi Karkuzashvili
Ended up doing a big pixel art version of this character! Was exciting to mix line quality with pixel art lines
kathryn martinez
This exercise if 4+difficult for me. Will do more
Martha Muniz
Try simplifying them into basic shapes first, like a circle for the head, a pear shape (or two circles stuck together) for the body, and ovals for the legs. Once you get the hang of their simplified version after a couple of attempts, it will make it easier to just work with those shapes to move them around into different poses from your imagination.
@crowlle
7mo
i drew this as i got inspired by a creator here who made a few pic ideas post the credit to the idea goes to @Vincent Lagacé
Stefan Sharkov
I can see the inspiration. Good job.
Robert
7mo
really love the line weight on this one. Shapes look great too. This definetely not your first time drawing
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