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@toph
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3d
added comment inDemo - Depth and Form Line Weight
I’ve learned something from this. I HATE line art, the drawing itself I think came out fine. I took the creative liberty and didn’t draw the laces
Wow you can really see improvement!! They are both good but the 2nd one is just so eye catching
@toph
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7d
I decided to redo this assignment after watching the demo because I felt like I saw a lot of room for improvement. I think I was a little too timid the first time so I made sure to add more variety in my line value and thickness. If anyone has any critiques I’d really appreciate!
@toph
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10d
Asked for help
The one to the left is using lights and shadows the one on the right is hierarchy. I really wanted to have the eyes draw to the horn and less to rear. I won’t lie I really winged it on this assignment because I was a little confused if I’m being honest? But if think I did this well, let me know any thoughts!
@juliusobermair
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17d
Asked for help
I did the first two & then in a very lazy manner I quickly did the one with imagining a different lighting. If you look at it from further away it looks fine 😆
@markimus
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1mo
This was my attempt at varying line weight. I started with a light sketch approach because I wanted to try to improve on that. The base of the hammer was difficult for me. I would welcome any constructive feedback! I had fun making this one =)
You definitely varied the line weights! I like how you made the hammer the focal point with how dark the value is. My only suggestion is making the lines on the handle a little bit thinner maybe
@labuge
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1mo
few practice on the lines work. after practicing sketches from observation and imagination on FrenchBulldog, i realize how much my imagination versions were close to toaster, so i decided to do a toaster one...
@toph
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11d
I forget that I can kind of draw lol. I honestly didn’t think I’d be able to draw the cup, but here we are. I think my line weight looks good, but I’m biased, so please give any critiques!
@toph
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16d
This is after watching the critique. I feel like I definitely gave myself more freedom to just explore and see where things went which was lovely. Would really appreciate any critiques! (Repost because the last one had a typo that didn’t make any sense)
@araka
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17d
Asked for help
Hello, here is my work. It was really challenging; I find it easier to copy than to create. But I suppose that's the point of this exercise ^^
I'll stop with this drawing. I could keep struggling, but the upcoming lessons should help address my weaknesses.
Issues I see in my drawing: misunderstood of volume, back legs of the wolf, and the head.
