First attempt at the project before watching the demo. This project really helped me get to grips with procreate’s brushes. Feedback welcome!

Left: 1st attempt before watching demo. (Hierarchy of importance exercise.) Right: 2nd attempt post demo. I loved this exercise because: 1. it switched up the learning from sketching to now only worrying about linework to practice. 2. Seeing the difference before and after watching the demo. After writing down some notes, I returned to the drawing and did it again. I can see the difference and its amazing how much I learned from this single exercise. Feedback is a welcome :)

was really fun to do this project!

I made this one after the demo, I had a hard time finding the most important lines and I think i made them too thick.

It was kind of hard to determine how much detail to keep so I'm curious to see the demo... Overall I think I did okay!

Here is my before and after. In my opinion i made a big improvement. I made it darker and thicker at the feet to give it more weight and made the horn darker to show it as a more significant part of the image. Also i might have pressed too hard with the pencil i'm not sure. It's a 6B I used in the after. Before: After:

Lots of fun, did my own redline just to get more practice at drawing animals. Here's my hierarchy of importance.

Redid my rhino after demo. I can see some improvement. Feedback!

Good morning my second attempt after watching video is on the right side, but now that I look at it I think I like my first attempt on the left better. Feedback welcome

Before, and After I don't know how I do

a before and after

Hi guys. Here are my rhinos from level 1, had a little bit of problem when it comes to shadowing the lower part of torso but it was nice exercise

I did these before the video. Looking back at them, the second rhino could use some darker shades for more emphasis, but I think the thick lines are in the right spot.

Did one by myself then with vid

hierarchy primary emphasis on the shape of the rhino, secondary emphasis on the horns and head, shadow - illuminated from mid right, then shadow imaginary illumination from upper left

When I worked on my version, I never thought that I was "allowed" to give variety to the lines, and so all my lines (even though they had different thicknesses) had no variety on their own and were very linear. Going from thick to thin as the contours go into the inside seems very interesting too, I'll be doing that next time I use this method. I ended up trapping myself by thinking "make contours thick, and the rest thin". Looking at the reference as I was working would have helped a lot with discerning what is important, rather than just making the contours thick. By not looking at the reference, everything else within the contours becomes "just less important details".

Left was pre demo and right was post demo. I think the main takeaway for me was that the contour shouldn't be too light. In the pre demo, I wanted to emphasize the horn, and ended up making everything else too light in comparison. In the post demo, I think it looks better as the horn is still emphasized, but the darker contour makes the rhino seem more solid and grounded.

Hello, here is my rhino and I tried my best. I would love to hear your critique and appreciate your help.