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Tanjiro Hisana
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14h
added comment inDemo - Simplify Pear from Observation
Here's a before and after drawing of the pear. I feel my tones are more proportionate, but I believe more practice will make each shadow shape less ambiguous. Especially the halftone
Julia
10h
I definitely see an improvement in your after demo pear—I see more care with the way you designed your shapes. Your consistent and clear use of tones really make the pear appear three dimensional and clean. Great job!
Julia
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2d
Definitely not an advanced student, but I wanted to challenge myself and give this a try. The first is before the demo, and the second is after watching the demo. I struggle with seeing the shapes and designing them accurately. I also got lost in some places, and couldn’t keep track of all the values. But I found the demo to be really helpful, and a great practice!
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2d
Big improvement between the two! Nice work. It's clear you are thinking more about designing shapes than drawing what you see in the second image.
Julia
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2d
First image is the before demo, and the second is after the demo. It seems like I am struggling with distinguishing and capturing the values correctly. Maybe that’s why my pear doesn’t look three-dimensional?
Feedback is welcome, thank you!
I believe your proportion and shape confidence has improved greatly just from seeing the demo. However, I would work on keeping the tones nice and smooth without looking wavy - still something I struggle with as well
