Figure Drawing Critiques - Gesture
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Figure Drawing Critiques - Gesture

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Figure Drawing Critiques - Gesture

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Marshall Vandruff joins Stan Prokopenko to critique student gesture drawings.
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Kevin Patel
Hello I was wondering if anyone could critique my gestures! The things that stick out to me right now are doing single lines instead of "stuttering" and using more c curves for the arms instead of muscle contours.
Abigail G.
4mo
I just finished the first assignment for the figure drawing class and wanted to get some feedback on them! It’s been a while since I’ve done any gesture drawing, and I really want to improve. I would really appreciate any feedback/advice you guys might have! Most of these are 30 second-2 minute drawings, though the ones on page 3 are more 3-7 minutes. Also ignore the face on page 3, I got carried away lol
Jesper Axelsson
Hi @Abigail G., nice drawings! I'll do my best to help you further :) - It would help me to know what your art goal is. What type of work do you want to create? Do you have any examples of artists who does that type of work? - With drawing you communicate ideas. In your next attempt of the shorter poses try to make sure that the idea of the gesture (the action) is completed. In many of your drawings (image 4 for example), you have started to add details before the gesture has been communicated, making the drawings hard to decipher. -To me it has been very helpful to keep this line in mind: "Do one thing at a time". So I might start my figure drawing by focusing on the gesture. When I feel like I've said what I intended to say (the action; what the structure is doing), I might do another pass where I focus on the shapes that the figure is built of, and how they would look in the gesture I've decided on. When I've communicated the structure of the figure, I might start to think about clothing for example, and how the wrinkles in the clothing could lead the eye. The exact process wasn't the point here, but the idea of doing one thing at a time, since that creates clarity in your mind and in turn in your drawing. - I've been taught that a figure drawing needs proportion, balance and rhythm. Proportion (the structure), balance (the sense of weight) and rhythm (a flow that leads your eye through the drawing. Often one side of a part will squash and the other will stretch; all the parts of the body squashing and stretching together creates a rhythm). You need all three. I try to work on improving in all three areas and on making all three present in my drawings. You might want to try doing that too. I hope this helps :) Keep up the good work!
Filippo Galli
It was nice to be reminded that these are few of hundreds, if not thousands, so it doesn't matter if you get some looking off. Incredible insight from Marshall as always. The only way up is through patience and good practice. In any case, I'm excited to move onto the next part of the course!
@juliannavolkov
I took around 2 minutes with each pose and I used the references from the post below me (Jack Mills' post). I would really appreciate some feedback! An artist I really look up to is Rembert Montald because of his storytelling through illustrations. I really want to capture the movement in each pose, but I find it difficult when the person isn't actually moving. I know a good way to practice is drawing directly from animations. I think one of the things I have to improve is my lines. I keep adding new lines to try to "fix" the previous one, so the pose ends up being confusing. Please let me know what you think! I would appreciate a criticism more than a "looks good".
Jack Mills
5mo
Here are my gesture drawings from oldest to newest. My drawings are not timed, but I think I'm gonna do more timed drawings from now onward. If you got any feedback that would be most appreciated as I feel my gesture drawing progression is slowing down. References will be in the comments.
Jack Mills
5mo
These are all the references I could find.
Peter Tinkler
I try and do gesture studies as often as I can, as I'm still working my way through the Anatomy course, and don't want to stiffen up. These are mostly gesture, with a sprinkling of some structure. I didn't time these officially, but I'd be surprised if any of them were more than 5 minutes.
Patrick Bosworth
Excellent gestures!
Melanie Scearce
These are lovely, thanks for sharing. I really like the page with the two figures kneeling with the canes. If you want to get real loose try some 30 second - 1 minute poses to keep it fresh!
@nullmyriad
I've been focusing on 30 sec gestures to loosen up my movements, as my first gesture attempts were very stiff. I definitely see improvement, but would like critique/advice on finding more flow
Gannon Beck
I think you're on the right track. Nice flowing lines here.
DrawYer
5mo
These are some samples of my attempts after watching the demos and the critiques. I tried to really stay at 5min or below, but sometimes I got carried away ;D !  Any comments or feedback welcome. 
Aiba Miller
30s in red, 2 min in blue. Didn't realize how awkwardly rusty I was, I would love some real strong criticism, don't be shy. The more it hurts, the more I can learn from it. Sometimes I have a lot of trouble creating strong flow and lines in my figures. I spend about 30 seconds on each one constructing it in my head before I start.
Melanie Scearce
I think you have great drawings here. If you're feeling awkward and rusty, it could be a symptom of just not practicing enough so I recommend you make a daily practice of it! You could try doing even shorter poses, like 10 seconds, to challenge yourself to quickly find the gesture of a pose. Good luck with your practice :)
Huy Vuong
6mo
30sec, and rest is 2 mins, I got rusty with gestures but I'm glad getting back into it
Gannon Beck
Very nice, Huy! A few of us in this class and other classes are posting in a daily thread if you want some company in making this a habit. https://www.proko.com/community/topics/daily-drawing-with-timer-challenge#k8Z.bMm We also do some live calls where we draw together. DM me if your interested in those for the times.
@yoyoy12
6mo
Jesper Axelsson
Hi @yoyoy12, nice drawings! - Your drawings have nice rhythm! Now try to include some more structure. You want you drawings to have rhythm, but also structure. See if you can get both in your drawings. If you already have lines in a leg for example, that lead the rhythm, use the other lines to show the structure. Straight lines often communicate structure. I hope this helps :)
@yoyoy12
6mo
@yoyoy12
7mo
@yoyoy12
7mo
@iyana
7mo
Sorry that the images are dark in some places. I can tell that I am improving but I still find myself rushing to draw the gesture within the 2:30 time limit and doing those chicken scratch lines at times. I would love a critique to see how I can improve. Thank you!
@noag
7mo
Hey guys! I have tried my best, but I feel like I don't improve... Does anyone have any advice? (I attached 2 minutes and 30 seconds gesture drawing here) Thanks!
Gannon Beck
How often do you draw?
Emmanuel Moyo
I'm new to figure drawing and I'm not too sure what it is that I'm not doing right. Majority of my drawings come out feeling a bit lacklustre. I'd appreciate any advise.
Brando Gould
there's no way around it, figure drawing is one of the hardest types of drawing there is. I think you honestly have a lot of great stuff here! Great job doing a lot of these. I enjoy your line work. To your point of the drawings feeling lackluster, there is a point where Stan and Marshall talk about rhythm. Rhythm is an aspect of figure drawing that takes time to learn, but it is the connection point between two seemingly disconnected things. This can be a hidden connection such as anatomy (under the skin), a curve that is behind an arm or an obstruction. We must always be thinking about the form as a composition. Where can we see these connections and rhythms? If you don't know anatomy, just try to find beautiful lines within the body positioning. maybe the chin tilts towards the left thigh, draw a swooping C curve that connets the two and see what the result is! If you do know anatomy, use it to inform where certain points have a relationship! Gesture is the action of the pose, the weight, and feeling of a pose. It often looks best with confident mark-making and emotion rather than analytical and measured marks. Take a look at Force: dynamic life drawing by Michael Mattesi. Exaggerating the pose is helpful, even the most stiff poses typically have a lean or tilt somewhere, if you can see it, push it further to exemplify it on the page! The last thing I'll say about gesture is that it can't be accomplished with the stick figure style drawings that you are bending around. The linework MUST connect exterior with interior parts of the body and can not only stick to the center line or the contour. it is a careful combination of both! Keep it up!
faye zhang
8mo
Followed along a Life Drawing class by Royal Academy of Arts: https://www.youtube.com/live/RHbFyW279ME?feature=shared I found that it’s better to find the general lines of motion first, rather than finding the gesture of the torso, separate limbs etc. Very happy with my 25min figure in the last pic :)
Olena Salska
Some 2 min sketches
Jesper Axelsson
Hi @Olena Salska, nice drawings! There is nice rhythm and the proportions are pretty good. - What are your art goals? What work do you want to create? Knowing that might help me give more relevant feedback. Feel free to share a few works by artists that you admire, work that is the type that you want to create yourself. - Most of them are missing the feet. I would recommend including them, since they often contact the ground and are important in planting the figure and giving it a sense of weight. - Hands are also really important for the expression. - I'm intrested in animation, so I think a lot about gesture. When you draw the figure focusing on gesture, try to feel the pose in your own body as if were striking it yourself. Feel the weight on your feet, gravity's pull, the side of your torso compressing, the arm stretching etc. As you draw each part of the body, draw it as if it was your own striking that position at that moment. Feel your way through. If you're unsure how to draw a foot, just feel it as if it was your own foot and let the pen crawl on the paper. Put it where you feel the heel, the toes etc. and you might end up with a scribble that captures the overall placement shape and energy of the foot. Think of the figure as actually moving. Feel where it's coming from and where it's going. Like you're animating in your mind. Heinrich Kley is one example of an artist whos drawings feel like they're moving. Having a clear idea of the story of the moment is essential in animation since it drives your drawing choises. It could help to describe the pose with a verb. The character is "looking" at his palm, for example. Then you try to make the whole pose support that. I hope this helps :) Keep up the good work!
Olena Salska
@gog
9mo
some other gesture attempts they were 1min each.
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