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Abigail G.
Abigail G.
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Abigail G.
I just finished the first assignment for the figure drawing class and wanted to get some feedback on them! It’s been a while since I’ve done any gesture drawing, and I really want to improve. I would really appreciate any feedback/advice you guys might have! Most of these are 30 second-2 minute drawings, though the ones on page 3 are more 3-7 minutes. Also ignore the face on page 3, I got carried away lol
Jesper Axelsson
Hi @Abigail G., nice drawings! I'll do my best to help you further :) - It would help me to know what your art goal is. What type of work do you want to create? Do you have any examples of artists who does that type of work? - With drawing you communicate ideas. In your next attempt of the shorter poses try to make sure that the idea of the gesture (the action) is completed. In many of your drawings (image 4 for example), you have started to add details before the gesture has been communicated, making the drawings hard to decipher. -To me it has been very helpful to keep this line in mind: "Do one thing at a time". So I might start my figure drawing by focusing on the gesture. When I feel like I've said what I intended to say (the action; what the structure is doing), I might do another pass where I focus on the shapes that the figure is built of, and how they would look in the gesture I've decided on. When I've communicated the structure of the figure, I might start to think about clothing for example, and how the wrinkles in the clothing could lead the eye. The exact process wasn't the point here, but the idea of doing one thing at a time, since that creates clarity in your mind and in turn in your drawing. - I've been taught that a figure drawing needs proportion, balance and rhythm. Proportion (the structure), balance (the sense of weight) and rhythm (a flow that leads your eye through the drawing. Often one side of a part will squash and the other will stretch; all the parts of the body squashing and stretching together creates a rhythm). You need all three. I try to work on improving in all three areas and on making all three present in my drawings. You might want to try doing that too. I hope this helps :) Keep up the good work!
Abigail G.
I have to say, for your first time doing gesture drawing, these are really good! My only advice would be to loosen up a bit more, but that really comes with time. It definitely is really stressful at first, but it gets less stressful the more you do it. Something that's helped for me is doing my gesture drawings digitally (or on paper I don't care about), so if it doesn't turn out well, or I don't like it, I don't feel like I wasted paper. Keep at it! You definitely have some talent with this!!
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