Simplification is anything but simple! It's one of the most difficult core concepts to master when drawing, you're not alone! Drawing is a difficult skill that takes a lot of time and mileage to master, so don't get too discouraged! Take a look at the Figure Drawing Critiques – Structure Basics lesson here https://www.proko.com/course-lesson/figure-drawing-critiques-structure-basics/comments Stan covers how he would approach breaking down and simplifying a similar animal pose @7:23 That said, the you may want to check out the Drawing Basics course as well. It covers the core concepts needed for drawing that will lead you right into the more advanced figure drawing course. It has two levels of difficulty, so you can rewatch old lessons as you level up and develop your skills. Check out some of the free lessons if you want to get an idea of whats covered. It's currently in session so there's a lot more still to come! https://www.proko.com/course/drawing-basics Hope this helps!

Hey David! Try starting with fewer simple shapes to give yourself a framework to build from. You're breaking down the face here into a lot of planes, which looks pretty cool, but there doesn't seem to be an underlying gesture or foundation you're building from. Try to break down the largest forms first in the simplest way. Use basic geometric shapes, or build more complex shapes using CSI lines. Look for long connecting lines, and build evenly off a center line. Once you solidify your foundation you can start to carve out or build on top of the forms you constructed. Hope this helps, keep up the good work!

Great exploration! Really fun designs, keep it up!!