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DrawYer
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2mo
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This is my 3rd and last attempt at level 2.
I just shifted the POV slightly to the left. I wanted to have most of the boxes / fingers visible and there were not too many angle that allowed for it.
I am aware that the proportion between boxes could be improved, I tried to correct it after the fact.
I tried to create a form of rhythm between the fingers while being mindful of the convergence. I had fun with this level 2 even if my brained hurts a bit x).
I am aware that the proportion between boxes could be improved, I tried to (unsuccessfully) correct it after the fact.
Any comments or feedback welcome.
DrawYer
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2mo
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This is my second attempt at level 2. For the second hand, I tried to change the POV more drastically (as opposed to slightly shifting it). It took me a while to find a new POV I wanted to fully draw. I found some to be “uninteresting” as only one side of the boxes would be showing. I also found some to be very challenging because of the pronounced foreshortening, and I had to give up (momentarily).
I also gave myself a little more freedom to depart from the actual hand, that helped to focus on drawing boxes instead of an “accurate hand”.
Anyway, it is still a fun exercise to do (with many sketches being used as basketball for the bin).
I am excited to try the third hand !
DrawYer
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2mo
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This is my first attempt at level 2.
I tried to rotate the POV up and to the right slightly. I will try a more “drastic” change of POV in my next attempts.
I really have to think about each box and it feels like a non instinctive exercise but it is still fun to do.
Any comments or feedback welcome.
DrawYer
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2mo
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These are my attempts at level 1.
I did each hand before watching its respective demo.
For each hand I worked on each finger on the side before moving to the full hand itself. Drawing the overall shape / gesture before diving in definitely helped a lot.
I think for the second one I tried too much to “draw a hand” as opposed to draw 16 boxes inspired from a hand.
I struggled a lot when there was a lot of foreshortening and I struggled more with the second hand than the third hand.
I tried to improve from one hand to the other taking notes and using the tips given by Stan in the demo. I mostly tried to be more conscious of the overall coherence of the various boxes and to ensure there was some convergence.
Any comments or feedback welcome.
In the meantime, I will move to level 2.
DrawYer
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2mo
My quick little attempt. It made me realise how much my initial gut feeling would be wrong. I need to use these techniques even more (at least to double check myself).
DrawYer
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3mo
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My third batch of attempts at level 2 after watching the critics.
I really tried to be mindful of perspective (I.e., convergence, small size as you go in the background) etc, and I felt I was able to achieve better results.
I also tried to actively correct for a tendency to tilt the face way more than it actually is. It is flagrant on 18, to the point where something feels off.
I struggle a lot with detailed facial features like the mouth or eyes, I think I have a tendency to make them look flatter than they are… but it’s a work in progress I guess.
Anyway, any comments or feedback welcome. Onto three point-perspective
DrawYer
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3mo
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My second batch of attempts at level 2 after watching the demo but before watching the critics.
I realised that some of my proportions were off (specially the lower part of the face), I had a tendency to depart from the angle of the box / planes I have established (specially the chin area), and I need to be careful about the front plane to side plane ratio.
Finally, I really did not like 12 and I struggled with it. I decided to move on and I might come back to it later.
I will finish the last portraits before move to the next lesson.
Anyway, any comments or feedback welcome.
DrawYer
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4mo
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My first attempts at level 2 before watching the demo.
I tried to stick to straight lines and “box like” construction, but I got lost in details and texture too much on 6 and 7. 7 was also an issue with the beard and it threw my proportions off.
I think 6 also has some convergence issue, at least something feels wrong.
After a few drawings, I decided to go through a 3-step process, a box, then a more organic “map”, then the sketch itself.
I will stick to straight line and no texture for the next boxes. I did number 9 digitally as well but I lost it when procreate crashed :(
Anyway, any comments or feedback welcome.
DrawYer
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4mo
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My second set of heads after watching the critiques. I tried to apply the various tips and feedback given in the video.
My biggest struggle is when the pose is in between a real 3/4 and a from view (i.e., you can see both sides of the face and having a straight line for one side feels “wrong”).
It also takes me a lot of time and different tries when the bottom of the chin is showing.
Anyway, any comments or feedback welcome :)
DrawYer
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4mo
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My first heads before watching the critiques. I tend to struggle in more extreme poses and tend to rely on what I see (i.e., going for the details) instead of trying to keep it simple and focus on the structure and 4-step process. I am also showing the failures as I approached it as an empirical process (trial and errors). Even when it was obvisouly wrong I wanted to finish the head to see what exactly went wrong. I will watch the critiques and to the second half. I will also try to clean up the line quality.
In the meantime, any comments or feedback welcome.
PS: I thought it would be way easier than what I experiences so far x)