Nice work! I think you did a nice job finding the landmarks and exaggerating the pose. Something to watch out for is keeping your figures balanced. Your figure looks like it's about to fall over. If you keep the center mass of the body evenly distributed over the feet your figure more clearly shows the exaggerated lean you were going for. Hope this helps, keep up the good work!

Can’t see your gesture and primary structure form (robo bean) lines. Suggest you follow the process of gesture first, primary forms to establish perspective and key landmarks. Than stop and measure and correct the forms for height length and width before starting the “ manequization” process. Measure first if you ae after a high degree of realism. B.

great drawings! I have two thoughts if I may. To echo stan, it's helpful to create a rhythm between landmarks to ensure we've captured the gesture and for a proportional double-check. I see that you've identified the landmarks but you haven't indicated a relationship between them. for example the ASIS can be one rhythm to indicate the tilt of the entire pelvis. secondly, I think where you're marking the ASIS points is actually the top of the iliac crest. The ASIS is more anterior and at a lower point. I don't think this matters too too much, you can easily create a rhythm from the iliac crest points instead. correct me if I'm incorrect in my assessment anyone

These look great!

Nice try on these. I can definitely say the the left scapular is incorrect for for your first image. When the arm is up like that, the scapular is very flared out. see below (reference, proko)

They look really cool. I don't know what to tell you to improve! (one question, where do you get the references from?)

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Hi there, good work on these! In the last two poses, there are a few things I’d like to focus on. 1st pose (last page): the scapula should be rotating upwards rather than sitting in the neutral position. You can see the endpoints where the muscles dip into the skin outlining the trapezius muscle. It’s a little harder to see the bottom end of the scapula because of the teres major that’s covering it, but since the scapula is rotating upward, the bottom end of each scapula should end up closer to the outside of the body. 2nd pose (last page): the gesture in this one is a little stiff. You’ll want to make sure the gesture of the front of the body is arcing a little bit outward rather than collapsing into itself.

@onegogol There is a red “asked for help” tag you can mark your post, which may get more feedback from other students/ community members. As for some feedback from an initial gut reaction, these look really really good. As i don’t know your process, i’m not clear if the process was freehand or like digital anatomical tracing exercises from Anatomy course. If it was using any digital tracing overlays, then maybe next challenge could be drawing invented poses freehand using the landmarks you’ve identified so well. Appears you are more than ready to try challenge of taking a few of these same models and draw inventing a variation like what happens with that same character next in a scene. If i had to give one area to focus on Anatomy landmark wise i notice the calf muscles - gastrocnemius and soleus don’t appear to be well defined, and the graceful gesture of the front of lower leg of the c curve landmark that dominates front of tibia feels like it could be more present… almost like lower leg is bit too oversimplified/ too skinny. Overall, Very good landmark studies! I hope that helps.