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Devan Meck
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7mo
added comment inProject - Simplify to CSI
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@pinkyrose
7mo
The left one looks pretty good but the right one looks like you were getting tired or you tried to rush through it. Sometimes you have to walk away from it for awhile.
Sean Tisdale
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7mo
Asked for help
Camel :D I feel like the humps are out of place but I can't really tell why
The hump look pretty good I think but I would check the negative space between hump and neck, it seems a bit wide. The top of head is a little low compared to the top of the hump. If you drew a line from one to the other it seems like it should angle done to the right more. The only other thing I noticed was the belly. If you think of it as a 1/2 moon, it looks like it's leaning to the right more than in the reference.
Emma B
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7mo
Asked for help
Things I focused on
- simplified shapes
- c and s curves to show direction
- avoid pecking
- draw with arm
any advice or feedback is appreciated!
Watch the videos ‘6 habits of good line quality’ and ‘how to draw confident lines’ - the tapered stroke.
Rewatch intro to line video and do the daily practice he describes at 11:20.
@onegogol
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3yr
It seems people rarely get feedback here in the comments, but I'm still gonna post my results. Hope someone will point out more mistakes. I enjoyed this part of the course the most so far. Though I haven't yet taken the anatomy one, so I didn't indicate that many muscles, especially in the back. I also struggled with the shape of the gluteus in most of these figures, just couldn't really see that "donut". Thanks in advance for any critique, I really hope I get it.
These are great! One thing I did notice is the lower legs seem to all to be a bit too long compared to the photos.
For me the worst smell I can think if right now is the bottom of a garage can that hasn’t been cleaned in months that’s seen foods like fish or meat... yeah that’s pretty bad.
