Hi @phonk, great job! I really like how you managed to maintain the gesture and attitude of the animals and insects, while giving them structure. - The first batch of animal drawings didn't appear as structured drawings to me at first. With a closer look I noticed that you did use simple forms to construct the animals (a sphere for the dogs head, boxes for its paws, for example), but I also found places where the structure feels ambigous. In the bird for example, I can't really tell what forms you've used to construct it. The second batch of drawings is much better. They are clean and the forms are easy to read :) - While continuing with the course, I would recommend practicing boxes and cylinders as a warm up. You still have room to improve the convergence of the boxes, the shape of the ellipse and the placement of the ellipse. Hope this helps :) Keep up the good work!

Your lines are very clean! I feel that some of your animal structures have lost depth. In particular, the rear ends of the pangolin and the camel push away from the perspective of the viewer, but that is not as obvious in the drawings.