I learned a bunch of lessons with this painting. First off, never spray fixative late at night when you’re half asleep...big mistake. It dripped all over my canvas board, and I didn’t notice until halfway through the next day. Now that it’s dried, those splatters stick out like a sore thumb and really bug me. I uploaded two photos in different lighting (outside and indoor light), plus a third to show the fixative mess. None of them quite capture the real painting colors. Photographing art without glare is a skill of its own, and my lousy phone camera doesn’t help
Beyond all those hurdles, I think the face I painted came out rounder than the reference, and my halftones lean warmer than I intended. The chin could have better edge control in some spots and the hair under the hat looks a little sloppy, I really struggled to get clean shapes in that area. I'm sure there are many other things that need work but these stick out to me the most. Overall I would say I had fun doing this painting but if I'm having fun I must not be doing something right.
Very nice job. On the costume, try warming your lights a little more toward amber and cool your shadow color slightly more toward red. Using analogous hues on the color wheel when modeling light and shadow creates more visual interest. It depends on the effect your light source has on your local color too. Try using the most intense color for the halftone next to the core shadow, as you've nicely done on your cheek.
There are probably still a lot a problems in it, but I think I've hit the point you talked about where I really don't where to go from this stage. What bothers me most about it now is the right side of her face looks too sharp, almost cut out. I tried to soften it, but it still looks sharp to me. Its like its not in the same atmosphere.
Looking at it again, and looking at it in black and white, it doesn't look too bad ( I think it looks better in black and white). My father used to tell me make sure to work some of the background color into the subject, and some of the colors in the subject, into the background so they look like they share the same atmosphere. In one of the video in the first lesson you mentioned an art teacher told you if you still had a brush full of paint - put it somewhere else in the painting. I'm thinking its the same concept and not about saving paint. The problem is, I wouldn't know how to research it because I don't know what that idea is called. I think its more specific than color harmony. I think that's what bothering me. She seems isolated from the background. I look through your paintings and I see the subject and the backgrounds do share colors and it makes it look like they are completely at home in that atmosphere/environment.
Great job you should be very happy with this. I think the value on the left in the light where we would call her jowl you’ve gone a little too dark and warm but other than that, I really like it.
Morgan - forgive me for not using one of the models but I needed to get this one done. I cannot tell you how much more colorful I was able to paint in the light areas and halftone areas and with so much more color vibration than I usually paint with after watching these videos and simplifying the values of the face into 5-6 values. No blending, just tiles of color. I had watched your previous videos (Painting for the Impatient and Homework) but something really clicked with this course, I cannot think you enough for your help. You're the GOAT in my opinion. Any feedback you want to give I'm all ears. Getting feedback from you would be like you getting feedback from Sargent. And I know I'm not the only one here that holds you in that high of regards. Thank you!
The second assignment was only one week after the first, and I can already see the improvements. More importantly, my brush felt more confident and efficient when doing the second. Thank you, Maestro Morgan!
I really enjoyed this portrait and learned a lot. I'm looking in the mirror backwards more to get better accuracy. Critique appreciated. I enjoy your jokes too.
I definitely went through some struggles with this one. The eye on the shadow side bothers me a lot but i can't seem to fix it. I think the corner of the mouth needs to be move up a bit as well. I will try attempt to fix them when its dry. Anything else that needs to be improved or fixed ?
You’ve done a good job and I think it’s great that you’re trying to be critical of the drawing. What you need is a better technique for finding your mistakes. Take the photo and put it right next to the painting and practice rapid eye movement back-and-forth. Do it with each area like the eyes and then do it with the nose and go back-and-forth and really try to notice the differences. In doing this, you will create a more critical eye.
Thank you for providing such inspiring references! I struggled to paint this but it was also a joy! I decided I needed to put it in time out and maybe revisit it after my skills improve. That shirt gave me fits! I'm finding out that I am a very messy painter and I get totally overwhelmed with brushes and rags all over the place. I have a hard time cleaning the brushes in between colors. I keep having to remind myself that I am not painting a wall and to stop overworking my brush strokes. Even though I am already quite slow, I think I need to slow down more and stop when I start getting tired, because then I make a mess. Anyway I appreciate you sharing your knowledge with us. I am quite happy with my second oil portrait, I love the old world/antique feeling of it!
Morgan - Thank you for the course. It's hands down the best painting course I've ever watched. And thank you for your recommendation of the Blick linen panels with extra gesso - great surface to paint on for not much money. I have a few more general questions that I would love to get your opinion on so I'm going to just ask them all at once. 1.) Do you still paint your larger pieces on Claessens 166? If not, what are you using now? Also do you add extra gesso to your stretched linen pieces? 2.) Could you explain exactly what you prefer to use (products, sheen, etc.) and what your normal standard operating procedure is for varnishing your paintings? 3.) Any tips for photographing your completed artwork? Your paintings are incredible but the photographs of your paintings are excellent too so any help there would be much appreciated for people like me who can't seem to photograph their artwork well.
yes, still 166. yes, gesso like I do in this course. I use gamvar gloss varnish and add their cold wax medium to it to get rid of the shiny effect. I use a electric hand blender to mix it. stick blender. I use two tungsten 500 watt lights on both side of the painting that is on the wall , on it's side. I shoot through white umbrellas. I bracket for best exposure. always using a tripod on a slow shutter speed at lowest iso. Try to shoot in the f8 area of aperture.
It's was an excellent exercise, I lerned a lot but I'm definitely not happy with the results. I tried painting without sketching it first so it gave me a lot of trouble later. Gonna try it again some time later on.
I find myself getting too blend crazy at the end, I can't seem to stop myself. One of the things I'm really struggling with is the thickness of the paint, I feel like I'm applying it too thick. It still looks too graphic to me, but overall I'm happy with the result.
If you’re going to go blend crazy, let it be for the sake of edges there are still too many hard edges and not enough soft ones like the cheek and all along the shadow side
Learned a lot from this one. Took a long break between sessions and had to remix everything but it was good practise overall to get the matching values from scratch. Also continuing after everything is completely dry is daunting.
I think I'm most happy with the shirt. Kept it loose and it turned out okay.
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