Critique - Simplify to CSI

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Critique - Simplify to CSI

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Stan Prokopenko
Let's take a look at your "Simplify to CSI" submissions! I decided to combine both level 1 & 2 students for this critique since I saw very similar mistakes at both levels.
Newest
Gera Mve
19h
I used to get very frustrated while drawing, but lately, I've noticed that it's getting a little easier to understand the images I'm trying to draw. Yet there's a lot to learn. I would appreciate some feedback on my drawing. :))
@deepanshu12
a fly
@labuge
2d
Hey Guy, I tried the boot exercice…. Very hard as you can see, after 2h30 I stopped on the 1st boot and just practiced the CSI all arround 🤓because it seems very hard to get proper lines.
@androida
12d
I drew the boots again after watching the demo and critique videos. Very helpful :) (Left before and Right after)
@lazycynic
16d
@markplewis
I found it very difficult to simplify forms into basic CSI lines! I just can’t seem to stop myself from refining. I think I need to practice this a lot more in order to internalize the lesson and gain confidence in my line work without concerning myself with measurements and perspective.
@hobodios
28d
Idk how to feel about my line quality, I probably shouldn't worry too much about it.
Rachel Dawn Owens
It’s super clean and fresh! You have a nice style for animation
@superokay
1mo
Attempting a bird using these techniques. I want to improve my line confidence, I guess repetition is the only way to improve that. Luckily I’m really enjoying simplifying these images
Melanie Scearce
Great!
C3
2mo
C3
2mo
@canuckgirl1
I redid the snail and boots. Got stumped on the shoelaces. Critique more than welcome
Melanie Scearce
It looks like you were on to something with the shoe laces in your first attempt. It may be a matter of getting worn out by the time you get to the shoelaces -- if that's the case, maybe try taking a break before you start so you can begin with fresh eyes. It may help you to try very lightly drawing an "envelope" that encompasses the overall shape of the object. These will be a few light lines meant to help you control the size of the overall drawing so you don't worry about running out of room or changing proportions to make sure the drawing doesn't run off the page. It doesn't have to be exact, just enough get the general proportions accurate. Hope that helps!
@blackhand
2mo
The self study point is well taken. I actually traced the boots once, before I drew them, to try to get the feel for laying down the lines without obsessing about the accuracy.
@skylarsmithe
Did the shoes multiple times. Lines definitely looking better than the snail one.
Tony Zhang
2mo
Drawing feet literally sucks.
C3
2mo
Good lines
@20thunderbird17
Here is the second attempt after watching the video. Please, any feedback is wanted!
pinkfin
2mo
Spent a lot of time on this project, was challenging for me. Partly it took a long time because i was scared to start drawing shoelaces... I redrew boots couple of times because was not proud of my line art but at the end my hand got used to putting the lines down and honestly i like the result even though i think i didn't do so great with shoelaces. Would really appreciate some criticism!
C3
2mo
Good attempt
Rachel Dawn Owens
You did great! These are super clean drawings. It’s ok to be a little sketchy. Don’t worry about the details too much. As long as it reads, you’re ok.
@vitor_tumoli
First version of the snail task. Happy to receive feedback
@zaneki
3mo
tried the boots again after watching some crits, found myself getting very frustrated and unable to focus so i rushed a bit. critique appreciated
Melanie Scearce
If you find yourself getting overwhelmed or frustrated, I think it's a good practice to put it down for a bit and take a break. It's like hitting the reset button. When you come back to it refreshed you may notice something that you didn't before. For having rushed I think this looks great! Would like to see those laces finished. Good luck :)
Tommy Pinedo
I attemped the snail, boots, and camel before doing the skull as I left that as the last one. This was my first attempt. I like it, I am not sure if I should redo it. Any feedback?
Tommy Pinedo
I decided I am going to redo it. I can improve on line quality. lol
Dominic Statuto
Attempt one of the snail and boot project, as well as my second attempt on the boots. I feel that my boots improved proportion wise, although my line control for the laces is still pretty terrible.
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