My Attempt of the project! Any tips help!

here is mine attempt of 1 min and 5 min 10 pose.

My attempt! What can I improve

This is my attempt. It so hard~ but I kinna enjoy it I still struggling with long straight line it also take me too long I assume to do this project it took me an hour. I don't know if that is too long. I just use the idea of the car and change it position. I tried be creative with the wheel by turning it. Turn out it quite above my capability lol. And tips and advice is greatly Appreciate!

here is mine little attempt pre demo. What can I improve? I especially have problem with picture 3 the line is blurry I dont understand it any help would be great. I have a little critic for myself too, but i don't know if the critic is right.

I thought drawing straight line as long I connect the dot it would be easy. Turn out my hand still too shaky even after the warm up ensure that I draw proper straight line. anything I need to consider next time? any feedback help thanks a lot!

I feel like a lot of my issues is stem from I dont understand the proportion of the body yet. a lot of the pose is quite hard to see the flows all the bump and muscle make some lines blurry. How do i improve this what did i do wrong?

my before vs after demo. anywhere i can improve?

My pre-demo attempt

I done the animal from the project and go wild with some more after watching the live stream. How can I improve?