idk why but i always feel like my pencil isnt dark enough

before and after

a before and after

it was really hard for me to remember to us csi lines especially for bigger strokes

i should experiment more with the shapes and have more dynamic poses i hope to get more advice on how to improve

here are my before and afters

hers an before and after, would like some critiques thank you

I tend to overcorrect my drawings, including proportions, curves, lines, etc. (I'm a perfectionist). In this snail drawing, I noticed that my proportions are a bit off, especially the head and the shell. Overall, the drawing is OK but not that great (7/10), even though I followed the demo step by step.

I didn’t quite understand how to shade the lip properly, but I did one before and after class