Now that you’ve all had some time to try the first project on your own, you can watch how I do it and figure out what areas you are exceeding and struggling with.
Here is my step-by-step demo on how to properly execute the first project for level 1 students.
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Wes
7h
First is pre-demo, second is post-demo.
One part I struggle with is getting the desired values with my pencils. 4B, 2B, and HB all seem very similar with the same amount of pressure. 6B easily standing out as darkest, and 2H as lightest, but getting good in between values is difficult, but I will hopefully get better with practice.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
@dwinters
23h
First attempt, just watched the demo can’t wait to try again.
@pmirko
1d
this is watching the lesson ....
Al Fleur
2d
Here is my attempt at the level 2 project.
Mo B.
2d
First attempt without reviewing the observation video and the second is working alongside it. The first was primarily done with an HB pencil and the second was a combination of H, HB, and 2B. Definitely want to continue practicing this more and work on my control better.
Madison theisen
3d
all i had was a blue col erase at the time also some critique on the side for myself
Al Fleur
4d
Here are my attempts at the firsts project. Will be attempting the level 2 tonight. Input is appreciated. Thank you!
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3d
These are looking great!
I liked your reference. It’s got a clear single light source.
I made this demo from it to better explain this assignment.
It’s important to keep the 5 separate values easy to distinguish from one another.
I love your apple drawings. The texture you are making with your marks looks really cool. They look smooth.
Kristina Crowley
4d
Bret Stuffelbeam
4d
Here’s my attempt at the pear in the video. Done with just a 2H to see what my limits are with that pencil. Definitely want to try again with a range of pencils.
Have fun everyone!
Traci Williams
5d
Pear on left is after watching demo and pear on the right is on my own. Oh and I didn't have a 2B pencil so I just used the B for the entire drawing. Would love feedback!
Anna Clark
6d
These are my pears. First, my reference picture, then my first attempt, and then my second attempt after watching the demo. If anyone out there could take some time, I would LOVE some feedback!
Thaddeus Mikle
6d
Hello everyone
Beginner artist here any critiques on my work would be extremely helpful
Anna Clark
6d
Hi! I like your pear. I think something that you could improve on with your drawing is darkening the darks. I feel like there are only 3 values in your pear when there should be 5. I think you did do a really good job of using only sharp edges and straight lines, though!
@araka
7d
Hello and nice to meet you, here is my drawings,
Good day everyone : )
Justin Thompson
7d
Seeing the lighting edges is so difficult haha
@p4nd0ra_007
8d
Hi there! The right is my first attempt at the simplify from observation project, the left was after watching the demo video. I made a few changes that I think did help! I initially held back from using multiple pencils for some reason, and with that I think my values suffered. Happy for any other critique!
@jo_r
8d
My third attempt at drawing the reference image. I really enjoyed identifying the shapes through straight lines. But I think I should've paid more attention to the where the curves start/end in relation to the rest of the pear's features and opposing curve. And now watching Stan, I see there's no dark value on the right side.
@captpotato
8d
Started to learn how to draw, I think the shape of the pear is not that bad, but the shadow of the pear is very bad....
Zane
8d
Beginner drawer here, this is the pear demo exercise. The first image was my drawing after watching the demo video. The second is my reference image and the third is my drawing before watching the pear demo video. Hope someone critiques my drawings :)
L Kelly Jr.
9d
First attempt prior to watching the demo overall I really liked it but I really messed up on the stem it looks wrong in multiple ways.
@ramondc98
9d
I think i messed up the second drawing with the background, i changes directions, on the right side... but, I'm happy with it for my first drawings!
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