It's looking good but for an average I would make the nose a bit shorter and add the mound of the mouth, from above it looks really good, from the side view I think the neck could be more angled forward (it appears to be too upright) but overall a great study and it looks like you've learned a lot so far!

Andrew here is my completed assignment for the simplified head with secondary forms. Please critique. Thank you.

Nicely done! Those shadows on the second image look great. Keep it up!

Great job! I like that I'm starting to see your style with these assignments. With some of them you might want to take some time and clean up the forms and surface texture a little more and that will help you be more precise with the anatomy and surface details. Really nicely done!

Nicely done! I can definitely tell the more feminine features of this abstraction. A critique I might give is that how the nose attaches to the mound of the mouth feels too deep of a cut in. That mound of the mouth makes the distance from the tip of the nose to the top of the upper lip shorter when observing the profile view. Does that make sense? Other than that it looks great! Keep it up!

Really nicely done! I like the planes you've highlighted around the cheeks and mouth. Great job!

I lowered the brow. It's still a bit too high. The ears are too high up as well, making this problem look worse. Oh well, better next time :)

Nicely done! The first thing that jumps out is that the brow ridge might be too high. Children have a larger cranial mass compared to the facial mass. The nose also looks too large for the same reason I suspect. Great study so keep up the good work!

Hey great job! really fun study. Keep it up and I look forward to seeing your progression throughout the course!

hey great study! I like the muscles of the cheeks showing through. Keep it up!

Looking good! the structure of the head feels like its working. On this simplified version I wouldn't worry about the eyeballs or the lips but just the eye sockets and the mound of the mouth. The details can distract from the secondary forms that this specific assignment focuses on. Keep up the great work!

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The head looks great. It would be more helpful from the student perspective if it were front-lit to some degree to reveal more of the detail. It looks like you've already put some effort into how to light and display. I'd be interested in learning more about what you've tried and liked.

great job!

Yeah super sculpted can be tricky. Remember that the widest point is towards the back of the head (when viewing the head from above) in your image the brow ridge is the widest point. There is also the mistake of not enough mass in the back of the skull in general compared to the large facial features. I would reduce the size of the chin, nose, and bring the brow ridge down a bit to lengthen the forehead. Keep it up! You're doing great! I know it can be tricky but every sculpt you will improve.

This is looking great! one thing I might change is tilting the neck a bit more forward. The simplification of the features look good. good job!

This is looking great! The angle of the jawline might be a little close to 90 degrees but for the most part I really like what I'm seeing with this simplified head! Keep it up!