Good work! I think i can give you some pointers in this excercise: - Although the idea is to do thumbnails, i think your are very smal and you have very little space to divide the shapes. - For me it is not clear if you are working with two tones or three. I feel that this is because you are being quite inconsistent with tone. - I think that using feling the shape complitely with the tone you give to it is very useful. It gives to the drawing a better sense of being finish and also you could get a better sense of how well you decision with the tone was. Hope this is useful!

2, 3, or 5 value studies are all very useful exercises! Each one shows progressively more information.

It looks like you got it! These are perfect for notan thumbnail studies. The shapes are very nicely designed. Some of the shapes on the Sorolla one are a little bit clunky. The original painting is so fluid. Try bringing that into the thumbnails more. Keep it up. Can’t wait to see the next ones 👍

i like the organization of the poses very much

I found interesting the little details at the end of the tail. Maybe the photo itself looks a bit over saturated.

I think it could be a good idea to spend some time studying the gestures that Stan does in the videos. So you can get a feeling of how to get the effect of movement those gesture have.