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Pablo Flores
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3yr
added comment inMannequinization – Structure of the Human Body
Asked for help
Please critique my work
@winterpencil
3yr
These look absolutely stunning! If I had to nitpick I would say that sometimes the boxes don't seem to have a correct perspective. LIke in 8 of 10 the upper left figure has a hip box that has a little bit of a strange perspective issue. That being said, this looks amazing; good stuff!
Pau Luna
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3yr
Asked for help
Hi, I´ve been drawing for a long time as a side job. Looking for get better and become a professional artist now. This but a sketch, I´ll upload more things for your valuable comments
I like how expressive the face is, I would watch out for the line quality which seems to be a little bit scratchy, proko has a video on how to correctly hold a pencil, it's worth a watch! Good luck on your art!
@winterpencil
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3yr
It feels like I'm missing something, maybe contour lines? Anyways, any feedback is appreciated! :)
i feel like there not that good but maybe I’m being too critical any thoughts.
I feel like there's good solidity and structure. I would try to bend the lines on the boxes and make them more curved when necessary, some of these figures look a bit stiff. But other than that I think that you're doing a good job :D
These look amazing good structure and you displayed the form really well
@winterpencil
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4yr
This is by far the toughest exercise so far in this course for me. Any tips are welcome !
Good job! It’s great how you really try to break down the animals in simple shapes and I think you have a good understanding of how they relate to each other. The one thing I would point out is that your drawings feel a bit cramped and stiff. The forms you drew are pretty rigid, but remember, you can modify them by twisting them etc. , that will give your drawings more gesture and life. And I would suggest to draw a bit bigger, that will help you to give your forms more volume. But you’re on a good path, keep it up!
@winterpencil
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4yr
Some structure drawings, they look a bit sketchy, I need to work on the structure a bit more
I love the movement on these! Personally I would just try to make the lines a bit tidier, the lines on some of these are a bit messy in my opinion. Other than that, keep up the great work :D
@winterpencil
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4yr
Any suggestions, I'm afraid that I'm not overlapping the spheres correctly in the bean. Critique is welcome, encouraged and highly appreciated !
Good work there! :) Did you draw them digitally or with pencil? You did very good. I think you can impforve your line quality. If you draw with pencil I recomment to watch prokos video on how to hold a pencil., pretty good advices are given in the video :)
