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Arielle Ronin
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10mo
added comment inProject - Mannequin Hands
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Messed up the proportions. The fingers are too short (the boxes way too small) and the back of the hand too broad. Well was kinda afraid that it comes out bad so I kept myself from just experimenting. Think one can see this because the drawing and boxes look kind of constrained. Always interesting that the fear of making a mistakes leads to a poorer drawing than when one is relaxed and just enjoys the experience :O noticed this already a few times while participating in your course :)
Wow that looks really amazing!!!
Since this looks very professional I gonna go for a very detailed feedback :)
I think the pose looks a little bit like you don't know exactly where to go. I did Muay Thai fighting for a few years and with these fighting poses there is always a very defined direction in which the force you apply go to. The base is always very solid (keep your arms and legs in your basic position to not loose balance) and only to block or attack you get a strong force in the diection you want to hit your opponent. In your pose the force of the knee is going to the front right and the hip of the character is twisted to the right so the hips direction is to the left. But in Muay Thai and MMA the force always comes from the hip and the shoulders. The arms and legs are more like an extension but the punch/kick comes always from the shoulder/hip. So I would adcive to either put the left leg in a position there it is pointed to the left (like the direction of the hip in your drawing) or to adjust the hip and the torso. Since the Torso and Hip/Leg direction go all over the place, he seems very unsolid and in a fight he would really fast loose his balance and be a nice prey :)
Mariyam Khaidarova
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1yr
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Working on this was super fun! It was a nice way to practice pressure control on my pencil. Hopefully, I'll be able to rely less on erasers with time.
And... My proportions were off, so I ended up with a chonkier mouse.
Marco Sordi
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1yr
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2023/10/21. Good afternoon everybody. Here's my stylized hair study sheet num.6. Thanks and have a good week end.
Arielle Ronin
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1yr
Thank you so much for your critique :) This course is so much fun and helpful! Thank you for all the effort and time you put in your project, demo and critiques videos. Your instructions are making drawing so much fun that it's pretty hard to put the pencil away :D It's like burning through those scetchbooks! :)
Noe Luis
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1yr
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I tried level 1 on this quite a flow of an exercise. Please tell me if I took notes very well or just okay I would like to learn more on self taking notes. @Arielle Ronin here are some drawings that you ask for hope you like it.
@bonnieblue
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1yr
hi y'all, HELP PLEASE. Where are level 1 people supposed to quit? I missed where the stopping point is. Here's 3 hrs & 2 tries & I can't find the forrest OR the trees! I haven't missed any lessons, done all the assignments, draw on my own, etc & this is way beyond me. Don't get me wrong, I want to learn how to draw people, but this is crazy. What am I doing wrong? Thank y'all for all the help
Lolo
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1yr
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This course went from beginner to advanced real quick. Very frustrating, and the poses are too advanced and now seals make me cry.
Arielle Ronin
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1yr
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Tried the overhand grip. Not that easy to control, I struggle with this grip a lot with the line weight. But this is a very fun practice :D
Noe Luis
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1yr
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I did a quick sketch of the reference photo. I would like some feedback on the proportions. Also did I capture the features well Im only asking this because I still struggle drawing out the features.