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Pablo Flores
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8mo
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I drew these today could you please comment?
Tell me if there is anything else I should do.
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3yr
Hi @Pablo Flores, great job!
- You're showing the form very well, though it would be nice if you designed the forms in a more gestural way. In your 6th image for example, the gesture of her supporting leg is an s-curve. By bending the forms to follow it you can emphasize the gesture.
I hope this was helpful :)
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Please critique my work
These look nice! but I think they're more of figure drawings than mannequizations. I think you're too focused on the contours and trying to draw the entire man than building him out of simple blocks and cylinders. More like a human shaped structure than an actual human. Remember that these are supposed to be a !simplified! foundation that you can draw a figure over, not a finished figure drawing. I hope this is helpful! Otherwise these are pretty good drawings and it looks like your making a lot of progress!
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Please critique my work
You should revise gesture , it’s going to help you get the movement, and pose better. It’s a small section, but by all that is holly it’s the most important when it comes to figure drawing. You are doing great by the way. Keep it up
These look absolutely stunning! If I had to nitpick I would say that sometimes the boxes don't seem to have a correct perspective. LIke in 8 of 10 the upper left figure has a hip box that has a little bit of a strange perspective issue. That being said, this looks amazing; good stuff!
Pablo Flores
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3yr
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3yr
nice work. The model's left foot on 1 and 3 looks a bit off. I don't have the reference to go by but maybe take another look at the legs.
