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Joe Burris
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16h
added comment inWarmups to Improve Line Quality
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I remember doing these when I attempted Drawabox. These are fun. Im glad to bring it back into my routine. Here's a bonus grumpy dog whose mad Im drawing instead of cuddling her.
@jasstallie
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5d
My attempt before the demo, I will try again with more searching lines, any feedback is welcome
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Im definitely not level 2 skill wise but this assignment sounded fun so I figured Id give it a try.
I chose an alligator and the only two things I wanted to accomplish going into it was showing off their silly fat pouch on their necks as well as their tiny arms. I think I may have gone too small on the arms. Its sloppy but I tried to keep it all loose. Hopefully I succeeded somewhat but at least I had fun.
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I feel like a dummy for saying this but I for the life of me dont understand how to physically do a tapered line. Ive filled sheets with lines trying to do it and its just not clicking.
Nonetheless I wanted to truck forward with the projects and just add the line exercises to my daily warmups. I tried going really loose and light for these and for a first attempt am decently happy with the results . The entire time I worked on the hand I thought it was a mess until near the end when it started to come together. Definitely lots Ill do different next time I try it but I think (I hope) I at least captured the energy of the source. I was running out of time whole doing the VR girl so my lines there are definitely hairier and more rushed. Im excited to try her again.
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7d
It's really muscle memory. Try your best and keep doing those drills, they will pay off! If you've ever tried to learn a choreographed dance or a skateboard trick, you know how many times you have to repeat for it to become ingrained 🔁 I think you're in a good place with your lines, so keep it up!
Joe Burris
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9d
My second attempt at camel and skull. I only got part way through the video before the urge to draw came in and I decided to just dive back in and Im glad I did because I feel a lot better than my first attempt. Still lots to improve on but breaking sections up into smaller lines really helped me out.
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8d
This is a big improvement! Really nice work @Joe Burris. Keep practicing with long, light strokes. Your lines on the skeleton get a bit hairy in places, although these are much more loose than your first round, so keep up that momentum. You're on the right track!
These look great! You captured lines I never really noticed in the picture that now I can't unsee.
Your lines are really clean and confident! Your laces, especially on the left boot, look terrific.
I don't have the know how to explain why but I really like how the toes on your left boot looks. Just really nice line work. Great job!
Joe Burris
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12d
My before and after demo for the boots. K think I did better before but I did the after demo days later (along with the camel and skull) and just feel like today just wasnt my day. I cant keep myself from pressing too hard on the pencil and I feel like I dont have control of what Im doing. Im also having great difficulty looking at something and back to the paper to try and replicate it . Each time I get back to the paper it feels like I need to reorient myself. Maybe its just an off day but Im definitely feeling lost right now.
Back and forth happens, some times there's an off day - I hope you won't feel too discouraged! I think on the after demo try on the boots, the overall shape of the left boot looks good and closer to the photo, actually since it's not longer as narrow on the top. You might've lost some of the depth in it though. I think right boot could be adjusted by fixing the left edge of the sole - if you just bring the curvy arcing part down to the ground. Perhaps that adjustment alone can make the whole image work better?
I often am rather heavy handed myself with the lines. The upcoming lessons on line warmups and looser sketching lines should help with that. You can also try holding the pencil from farther away from the point in case you are holding it really close. :)
Randy P
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18d
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Either I learned something along the way or I just really suck at shoelaces because this assignment just seemed easier for me. Haven’t watched the camel demo yet.