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@crowlle
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2yr
added comment inStructure Basics – Making Things Look 3D
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More practice , taking my time w this one I feel like mastering this before going forward is a good idea.(Also redid the horse will also redo the wolves i feel like i didint use enough geometric shapes.
Diana Mata
2yr
Hi @crowlle These look good! I particularly like the wolf. One thing I noticed on the horse, though, is the overall volume of its body. The thin part on top (where the spine is) and the lines around the torso and the stomach make it seem much flatter than what it should be. However, afterwards you posted an iguana which shows more volume in its torso. The way you solved the iguana's body could help improve the horse's.
Chris Martin
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2yr
How do you feel about this messy quick gestural approach? Should I polish them? Work slower?
Dwight
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2yr
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You won't believe it but I'm doing MORE gesture! Ever since I got that fountain pen I've stopped learning anatomy for now and am just chasing after Vilppu's way of drawing.
I tried some digital today and MAN is it hard to make good looking 30 second gestures. I keep zooming out because I always make my figure's heads so big. Any ideas on how to fit all ten 30 second ones on one page?
As usually, feel free to critique or question anything that's not ordinary.
Hi Dwight. I really like what you are doing with the simple lines – these kinds of drawings may look easy to make, but getting to the end result is not as simple as the lines themselves! If you are looking for ways to improve, I suggest taking a look at the foot of the last figure, the one that is bent upwards. The line doesn't really seem to decide if it is showing a simplified block or a transparency. Because of the placement we know that those lines represent the foot, but it is difficult to read: Where are the toes, the ankle, the instep? Is the arch visible? I don't mean that they should be drawn-drawn – the cool thing about these lines is the suggestion, but these particular lines muddle our understanding of that foot. But in the figure to the left we see how the lines are more intentional and suggest that the toes of the visible foot point towards the viewer. Meanwhile the foot in question leaves several questions unanswered: Are the toes may be pointing towards the viewer, to the side, or not visible at all? Perhaps the foot is shod? I really like how the fingers in the bent figure to the left turned out. Sometimes simplifying the fingers is enough, but in this case taking the time to suggest each one really pays off.
Tony Vu
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3yr
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Haven't dones this exercise in ages. I thought I would do a few to try to get a handle of the concept again.
Hi Tony! These look really good, I especially liked the second iteration on image 5. If I may make an observation: image 3 has a subtle twist that, in the bean, places the hips/bottom closer to the viewer. Looking at the reference photo, wouldn't the twist bring the top half closer to the viewer, bringing the hips under it? I could be mistaken– it's a tricky one.
Hello, is someone working with an anatomy book to place the mucles at the right place ? Like an anatomy book for bodybuilding for example.
Hi. You could check out the Draftstmen podcast on Anatomy. They recommend several books and artists, but perhaps the one closest to what you are looking for is
Strength Training Anatomy by Frédéric Delavier.
Here's the link with the notes for that episode where you can find other books and references: https://www.proko.com/course-lesson/how-to-learn-anatomy-draftsmen-s1e10/notes
Martin
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3yr
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Hi, some of mine robobeans. Thankfull for any comments and critique. Have a nice day;)
Hello Martin,
Robo beans are quite fun to make, I hope you are having a good time drawing them. I found helpful to do some of them with all the boxes' lines showing, meaning the hidden ones at the back. This is useful to understand what the body is doing, at a very simple level, and it is particularly helpful when twists and perspective become trickier. I'm attaching an example of what you could focus on when doing robo beans: when creating the box, remember there are shorter sides (red) and longer ones (blue), and that they connect as the figure bends or turns (cyan and yellow).
I hope this is useful. Have a nice day too.
Paolo
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3yr
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Hi all, this is my first attempt on structure, looking for a critique on what I can improve on.
Hello, Paolo. For this exercise, I would also recommend beginning with figuring out how the shapes could be translated into simple boxes. This will be particularly helpful to find the orientation, inclination, and even proportion of the various parts of the body. Hope this is helpful.
Marco Sordi
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3yr
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2021/9/21. Hello everyone. This is a personal interpretation of Elsa from the Disney movie, FROZEN. Before presenting the final version to my illustration course teacher, I would like to hear some of your opinions and possibly some advice on how to improve it. In particular I would like to increase the sense of depth of the background and three-dimensionality of Elsa (Elsa has a very fair complexion and I would not want to exaggerate with the shadows since the light of the ballroom is very strong and diffused). Also I would like to add a halo of brightness to the chandeliers. If you have any useful ideas please post them below. I also add some of the reference pics I used. Thanks for your valuable contribution.
Hi Marco! I think you have a real advantage working on digital, since you could try out playing with the shadows in a separate layer in case they don't work out. I understand why you might hesitate on accentuating some darker shadows, but they worked quite well on her left arm and hand. You could check out this Proko video on shading tricks–it's not too long and there are some interesting ideas in it. https://youtu.be/6vapw6n6FyU