Hi @John Masterton, nice studies! I think you've done a good job capturing the feeling of gravity, and the anatomy looks pretty accurate too! One thing I noticed is that the shapes of the breasts differ from the photo reference; Bottom left: her left breast points up quite high, like a cone, compared to the reference, which is more a flattened cylinder. Bottom right: Her left breast curves up too much in the drawing, which makes it loose the feeling of gravity Maybe this happened because you weren't thinking of the breasts as 3D structures. It would be interesting to see you approach the breasts with the same structure mindset, as when drawing the mannequin or when studying the bones (I attached an image from another critique. You can ignore the "1. 2. 3."- thing; that was only for that specific critique. I just wanted to show you breasts drawn as 3D structures. (They are kinda like jellyfish on top of the ribcage) Or maybe this happened because of the drawing process. One thing that helped me a lot was to follow along with Stan and mimick his process. One thing I found him do was drawing an oval envelope for each breast. These were not simple outlines of 2D shapes; with it he encapsulated the form and indicated it's interaction with the ribcage. Very simple but showing a lot. Hope this helps :)