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Mark Zhao
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2mo
added comment inProject - Dynamic Shapes
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Here are my drawings, any feedback would be appreciated!
may have been harder than you thought, but the results look really cool! I particularly enjoy the chicken and the square buffalo!
I like them! The Buffalo and choice of square shapes is a nice choice of shape language (i think). Not sure but I think the head is turned a little less than you have. The hippo is very hippo. I'm still learning so I don't know what else could be improved. Keep it going!
Mark Zhao
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4mo
Asked for help
Hi, here are my master drawing line study with James Gurney and Jeff Watt. unfortunately I dont have charcoal and I am not sure about what did James Gurney used in his drawing so I just used graphite. I lost patient a bit when I was drawing so I didn't get the poportion right in the drawing of Jeff Watt. I would like to hear your feedback and thank you for your support.
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4mo
Really nice job! The Gurney study is very well done, nice attention to line weight, and overall silhouette, excellent! For the Watts study, the proportions are looking a little off here and there, but you're definitely reading his calligraphy and noticing his line variation. While working on portraits especially, try to check in on your drawing throughout the process with a mirror test. Hold up your drawing in the mirror and study your progress, or take a photo and flip the image and you'll immediately start to see where your proportions need adjusting. The earlier you check in with a mirror test allows you to course correct without having to erase too much. Keep up the good work!
These look awesome! I will say that the bottom of your skulls jaw is larger on the right side than on the left
Mark Zhao
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4mo
Hello, here is my rhino and I tried my best. I would love to hear your critique and appreciate your help.
Wow, these look great! The only feedback I could give you is that you could keep your search lines in, instead of erasing them. The exercise is about being loose and sketchy. Your drawings look nice, but they are quite tight. Especially with the penguin and the hand. Nice work!
