Hi! These are my first four drawings. They are in the order that I drew them in, and the middle two were drawn along with the videos. Please Critique, thank you!

Hey, I have been working on the robo bean assignment for a few weeks now and I was wondering if someone could help me with critiquing some drawings of poses that I have been having trouble with. There are some poses that I feel more confident in (tilts, leans, some twists) but I find myself struggling with most foreshortening poses and poses where the model has a "straight-line torso". The first 2 pages are my most recent attempts, where I feel like I am mostly improving in. The last page has drawings where I don't really understand how/where to draw the boxes. If I could have help understanding how to do these kinds of poses, I would be very grateful!

2023-05-04 Hi, these are my attempts at finding landmarks on some 5 minute drawings that I did. The very bottom drawings on the first image are the earliest ones that I drew, and I have been working on this topic for about a week now. If anyone could provide criticism on these drawing I would be very grateful as I feel like there is still a lot I can learn to do better on this topic, but I do not know how to advance from this point. Thank you in advance :)

I made a crime fighting, cyborg mop man! When everyone's favourite janitor met a tragic end during a sanitation accident, scientist were able to fuse his mind with his favourite mop. When the world needed him most, when there was too much cleaning left undone, the Mediator of Purification (MoP for short) was born! Whether it's cleaning up crime from your neighbourhood streets, or that spill in isle 6, he will be there!

I hope to be a manga or comic artist in the future. I've started drawing because I wanted to give life to the stories I keep telling myself when I'm bored, and I wish I could picture them like the artists that inspire me do.