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Jordan Andersen
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27d
added comment inProject - Rhythms
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I've struggled with rhythms so I came back to try again. I've been doing these almost daily. Not sure if I am making progress or not. The lines in these are a little rough because I am trying out the overhand grip . But I feel these are the best I have done so far. Anyways, any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
GUYS! who wanna be my friend with some feedback?
Steve Lenze
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3mo
I like your drawings and I don't think your line quality is terrible, just needs some practice.
I did a quick sketch of your last guy to show you how you should begin by building the character with 3D shapes first, and then add details, I hope it helps :)
Thanks for the feedback! Your quick sketch looks really good. I think thats another problem I have is I focus too much on contours and not enough on shapes and shape design.
These are some of the latest sketch's I have done all from Pinterest save for the guy who is my own creation I did for a game jam. Any feedback is welcome! I feel like my line quality is terrible and I cant tell if that's just me obsessing over it or if I really should spend more time working on line quality. Thanks!
Jordan Andersen
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5mo
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This was fun and a little confusing. Not 100% sure I did them right. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks!
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5mo
These are perfect! Great work on this assignment
Jordan Andersen
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5mo
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This has been really hard for me. I think I've done 20 or so and dont seem to be doing any better. Any advice would be appreciated.
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5mo
These are wonderful drawings! I think you’re just focusing on the contours too much.
Gesture is a little more abstract.
I hope this breakdown is helpful.
Jordan Andersen
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6mo
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Not sure if I did these right but it was fun. I did a lot of these but these are the two I felt best captured the gesture. Any critique is welcomed.
Jordan Andersen
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6mo
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This was the hardest lesson yet but probably my favorite! I had never heard of Dave Malan before this but I fell in love with his art. I struggled to really understand what some of his lines were trying to convey but I tried to capture them as best I could.
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6mo
Great study, thank you for sharing this piece! I was noticing on the original that it seems like each section of hatching would start from the same direction, e.g. all the hatching for the cast shadow section under the goggles would start from the bottom upwards -- and so forth for the majority of clumps of lines. I think this is an interesting approach, as it both helps control the unity of weight in lines as they all taper in the same direction, as well as keep the separation between them clean. Definitely worth practicing!
