Proko - Jordan Andersen

I've struggled with rhythms so I came back to try again. I've been doing these almost daily. Not sure if I am making progress or not. The lines in these are a little rough because I am trying out the overhand grip . But I feel these are the best I have done so far. Anyways, any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

Ionuț Irime Nicolae

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3mo

added comment inDemo - Learning to Sketch from Observation

GUYS! who wanna be my friend with some feedback?

Jordan Andersen

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3mo

Really like your hand, those lines give it a lot of energy

Jordan Andersen

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4mo

added comment inProject - Value Scales

Asked for help

I think mine turned out a little too dark.

Steve Lenze

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4mo

added comment inLatest Sketches, Looking for critique

I like your drawings and I don't think your line quality is terrible, just needs some practice. I did a quick sketch of your last guy to show you how you should begin by building the character with 3D shapes first, and then add details, I hope it helps :)

Jordan Andersen

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4mo

Thanks for the feedback! Your quick sketch looks really good. I think thats another problem I have is I focus too much on contours and not enough on shapes and shape design.

Jordan Andersen

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5mo

added a new topic

Latest Sketches, Looking for critique

These are some of the latest sketch's I have done all from Pinterest save for the guy who is my own creation I did for a game jam. Any feedback is welcome! I feel like my line quality is terrible and I cant tell if that's just me obsessing over it or if I really should spend more time working on line quality. Thanks!

Jordan Andersen

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6mo

added comment inProject - Cross Contour on Organic Forms

Asked for help

This was fun and a little confusing. Not 100% sure I did them right. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks!

Rachel Dawn Owens

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6mo

These are perfect! Great work on this assignment

Jordan Andersen

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6mo

added comment inProject - Rhythms

Asked for help

This has been really hard for me. I think I've done 20 or so and dont seem to be doing any better. Any advice would be appreciated.

Rachel Dawn Owens

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6mo

These are wonderful drawings! I think you’re just focusing on the contours too much. Gesture is a little more abstract. I hope this breakdown is helpful.

Jordan Andersen

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7mo

added comment inProject - Dynamic Shapes

Asked for help

Not sure if I did these right but it was fun. I did a lot of these but these are the two I felt best captured the gesture. Any critique is welcomed.

Jordan Andersen

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7mo

added comment inDemo - Measure Proportions

This is a super hard project but I am enjoying it. This one is leaps and bounds better than my last but I still need a lot of work.