Hey Jason, Like your drawing, it feels very solid and gestural. I did notice though some things that you can look at to improve your drawing. What I do is check the distances between things, like the face and the shoulder. This helps me see if the proportions and placements are correct. I also check the tilts and what lines up, or doesn't line up like the hands in your drawing. I did a quick sketch to show you what I mean, I hope it helps :)