very nice! great job! If I had to give a critique I might just suggest pushing the nose and brow ridge forward in space to give just a little more depth to the eyes. Keep up the great work!
Forgot to cut the pointy nose off ;). Having trouble finishing to a finer resolution. Are there other tricks (e.g. solvents, smoothing tools) or are we just pressing up against the limits of clay? Will move on to the large eye after feedback. Thanks for your earlier suggestions.
Nice! if you want it to be smoother then it is just a lot of pushing around with tools and adding bits of clay here and there and smoothing out. There's no cheat code or solvent that can do that for you unfortunately. It's looking better with the depths. Keep it up!
Input needed. I'm about to scoop the eye out and restart. Would you agree that the eye needs to recess ~3/4"? If true, would you restart the eye OR build up the nose and brow?
I think eye could be recessed more but another thing is to make sure the inside tear duct of the eye is more forward in space than the outer corner of the eye. Keep it up!
Hi Andrew, I am a bit stuck here. Especially the area below the eye seems to be very problematic. Before I could continue, I hope to hear your feedback. Thank you.
It's coming along! I would watch the next video "What to look for when sculpting the eye" That gives some good pointers on angles and the forms of the eye from different viewpoints that I think could help improve this sculpt. The depths might be a bit off and so I would double check the accuracy from the side view by overlaying the reference photo with a photo of the sculpture to check the silhouette of the brow ridge, eyeball and eyelids. Keep it up! you're doing great!
of course! Way to go and do the assignment! You might try observing some of the angles like the 3/4 view to see the shape of the eye socket, brow ridge, and cheek bone, it feels like some of the structure around the eye could use some more development. Keep up the great work!
I have done and redone this several times. I either had the cheeks/forehead look flat or the eye look flat. Whenever I added material to one, the other one looked way too flat.
This is the best attempt in a lot of hours. I have huge problems around the eye and making the eye look 3d. I think I can't judge depth well enough. Any tips to help with that? Where am I making big mistakes?
Pretty happy with the side profile overall, but front feels iffy. Think I extended too far out under the eyes, and eye shape and nose are bit off.
I definitely found it tricky to focus on a 'square' of the face, seemed somehow like proportions were harder to gauge.
Although chipping away at this in work lunch breaks meant I could move it forward, I think it would have benefited from sitting down and properly commiting to it for longer sessions.
Looking great! really well done! yes isolating an area of the face can be a bit tricky but its a great exercise and this one is looking really good. Keep going!
Andrew, in my study of classical \contempory art I see my type of modelling eyes in sculpture. Is good, see other artist ? It's only the question not critique
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Gather your tools, clay, and a 4”x 4” or larger backboard, and create a life-size or larger self-portrait eye study.