wow looking really good! Glad to see the advice helped!

It's coming along! I would watch the next video "What to look for when sculpting the eye" That gives some good pointers on angles and the forms of the eye from different viewpoints that I think could help improve this sculpt. The depths might be a bit off and so I would double check the accuracy from the side view by overlaying the reference photo with a photo of the sculpture to check the silhouette of the brow ridge, eyeball and eyelids. Keep it up! you're doing great!