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@wayne_4360
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2yr
added comment inWelcome to Proko 2.0!!! 🎉
Asked for help
Hey guys, I have recently started to use the proko website and it's been really fun. I won't say I am a beginner at art, but i don't have any professional experience as well. I just want some critiques on this piece and just want to know what could I have done to make it better.
Sugar coat it for me would ya :')
@roiina
9mo
it's great for a beginner, you know what you want to draw and how to do it, I strongly suggest learning foreshortening and perspective because if you remove the arm here it makes it clear that the breast area is too low for normal, and antomy would be a big help but you need to have some good grasp on shapes in 3d form.
@adamilustarte
2yr
it needs more dynamic pose and adding some foreshortening would help, the hand feels a bit too small the gun feel small as well. And the left leg positioning felt a tad off, i would reccomend drawing the hips so that it feel mere solid in the construction of the body, even though its not shown. Beside those the rest are nice, and the color are good, wish you the best
@sachi07
2yr
rebbeca! wouldn't have thought I'd see her here Haha. the rendering and shading looks good! and the anatomy is decent (theres a few lines for the muscles and knees that are misplaced on the legs) and maybe you could add more to the composition (more effect, cropping, etc) to make it more dynamic and badass
This is my entry for September's Proko challenge hope you guys like it😊
