Hi Anubhav! I can’t find a place to reply to your request for help, so I’m posting here. Your drawing of that beautiful girl is great. The style reminds me of a Matisse portrait with a splash of Picasso!😂. It reflects all the hard work you have put into it. I’m so sorry your client didn’t appreciate it. They obviously want something more realistic. Since it is a blurry value only photo I think you really need to darken the darks and slightly lighten the lights in her skin. Darken the eyes and mouth. I added some darks to the left of her face and added some lights to the right. She needed to loose a bead from her necklace under her neck. This changes the placement of her neckline. I think that solves the reason her head appeared tilted. Hope this helps.

Creativity is off the charts here

Fantastic

This is really fun! This is a well done drawing with an interesting character. It stands out from the rest. I think you could push the gesture even further on your next drawing. Practicing with some quick, timed gesture drawings can help you get the hang of this concept. It becomes more intuitive with practice. Animators call this the ‘Line of Action’. It’s the flow of the forms. Overall, this is a fun and original drawing. Your shading and linework are a nice touch as well. Keep it up!