2024/9/25. Good afternoon everybody. Here's again a fantasy illustration I made in the last two weeks. Thanks for any comment or critique! "Silent Consoler" (30.5 x 45.5 cm, acrylics and acrylic gouache on 300 gr Fabriano watercolor paper).

Gesture practice, 2nd try

I sense that I’m doing something wrong. I was trying to go for a twist in the first picture, but the pelvis turned out too thick. Is there a way I can prevent this? Second, the in sitting pose I connected the back to the bottom of the pelvis instead of the top. Is this wrong in this case? Any other thoughts or critiques? Thanks!

The features are much too high on the head. The eyes are not level and kinda wandering. The ears are too big. The nose is too long. I hope that helps!

her head looks a bit small

I think your highlights could be a bit brighter, especially for the portrait in the centre of the second page. Her skin looks a bit dull. Beautiful job on the forms of her face! What captivating eyes!