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Elijah R
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added comment inProject - Measure Proportions
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There is definitely a better way to do this. This took me much longer and when looking back at Stan’s example I put too much detail where it wasn’t necessary. Even with all that time I definitely believe some proportional errors are still present especially the width. Simplifying is difficult for me it seems. I don’t quite understand why. Anyways, appreciate those who took their time to read to the end. 😊
Elijah R
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1mo
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There is something about shapes I think I’m clearly misunderstanding. I feel my shapes are either too complex or just not shapes at all. Either that or the animal looks deformed.
I think these look great!
I had the same problem. One thing Stan mentioned was thinking of the shapes as "paper cutouts". This helped me when trying to vision the 2D shapes underneath. Also, containing the shapes can help make them less complex. For instance, you have a lot of "open shapes" in the red page of the second page.
Elijah R
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1mo
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This was another line study I did, I saw this sketch from Oleg Yurkov and I really liked the lines when I dug into it. I didn’t do the background cause that felt like a lot but the entire piece is interesting.
Line hierarchy - making the lines thicker or making them darker to separate certain forms while making the inner lines lighter and thinner, generally speaking
Light&shadow - the light seems to be coming from the upper left
Diminution - the background is fainter, blurrier and lighter.
Really like this piece and I think this is a good artwork to do a master study of.
Michael Longhurst
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2mo
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I really liked the way Yusuke Murata used line thickness and spacing in his rendering on the so decided to do a study of it. As always I need to keep working on steady straight lines, but I was happy with how it came out.
How long did this take you? It looks like a lot of work since you did the entire drawing.
Elijah R
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2mo
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Not gonna lie, this was very difficult for me as a beginner. The lines were extra loose and flowy while mines were stiff as I wanted to not only execute the right type of line but sometimes the proportions were off. Definitely can do better, though I appreciate the challenge and gained a respect for Frank Frazetta work.
(Also not sure if cross hatching counts as lines so I went half in half out with lighter half tones to suggest there is meant to be a shadow there)
Elijah R
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3mo
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1. Light and shadow
2. Hierarchy of importance
light and shadow was definitely a bit longer then the Hierarchy of importance one since I really did have to vary the line and had to squint really hard for the wrinkles. Hope it reads well :)
Elijah R
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3mo
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Pretty self explanatory, nice warm ups, I really enjoyed the page skating it felt so freeing and I also liked the straight taper and the connect the dots exercise, it’s the swift movement.
@if_room
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3mo
Mixed success here I guess. I can see some insecure scratchy lines, and some nicer strokes. Did a few outside the prescribed exercises to get some more practice in.
I think my biggest problem (ignoring proportion stuff) here is line weight perhaps? My line weight is very inconsistent, due to lack of control rather than strange decisions being made. I see there's a line weight exercise coming up, so looking forward to that one!
I think Stan’s demo, about rhythms can really help here. Simple shapes are a lot easier to keep track of. He also talks about how to avoid contouring using these simple shapes.
Elijah R
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3mo
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This might be a bit above me, but I already started so I finished. Looking back I definitely should have exaggerated the drawing, but I think I was way too focused on getting it to look like a raven. (I am a beginner but I wanted to try doing something more advanced just to see how it ends up.)
edit: clarification the second image with that full page raven is my rendition done from imagination, all other drawings were done using a reference image.