Ben Whitfield
Ben Whitfield
California
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Ben Whitfield
Wow, some of those poses were very difficult. Here are my attempts at the 28 poses. I am feeling a little more comfortable with the techniques but know I definitely have a long way to go. Any feedback is always welcome. Off to watch the demos to increase my knowledge.
Ben Whitfield
Drew the 10 new portraits assigned to this project. I am happy with the landmark placement for the most part but need to a lot of work/practice on the tilts, proportions and under planes (when applicable). I still find these to be big challenge. I did not time myself but I estimated about 10 to 15 minutes per portrait. Any feedback is appreciated.
Ben Whitfield
Here is my attempt at this assigment. I took a break from this course for a few weeks because seeing the submissions from everyone is very intimidating as beginner. It is amazing seeing how amazing they are. It is also is very inspiring. Things can be two things right, haha. I used the blob method for my assignment and used my iPad charger. I'm not sure if I did this correctly, so any feedback is appreciated.
Ben Whitfield
I'm just starting to watch the lesson. I'm really looking forward to it because I like Michael's method of teaching. I generally struggle with face construction at this point with other teachers. One question I do have and it may be addressed in upcoming videos is when drawing traditionally how do I deal with all of the lines that I have laid in so far. It seems like it will be a challenge to reduce/lighten them? If anyone who has taken this course has suggestions please let me know I would greatly appreciate it.
@imeonasy
15d
I generally just try to draw them lighter so they get lost once I go in with the actual information I want to communicate, buuut you could use a blending stump to get rid of them and still maintain some sort of underdrawing to use as a guide. Or good ol' tracing paper, I suppose.
Ben Whitfield
I am still struggling with this assignment. Today I did gesture drawings of the 5 images supplied to us. Not sure if the wrapping lines and spine directions are accurate. I think the proportions are ok, but am having a hard time with the representation of the arms and legs. Any feedback/advice would be very appreciated. I have watched the demo videos a few times but I hope that the critique video will address some of the areas I am having a hard time with.
Josh Fiddler
Hey Ben, I did a little draw over for you. I'm not sure if these were meant to be pushed or just trying to capture the references but I think a primary issue in each one is the direction of things in space. Where an arm goes away from the viewer, the perspective given by the wrapping lines comes towards the viewer. But one really awesome thing you've captured is the lean of the pelvis. You really push those nicely, especially the 2nd and 4th, which goes a long way in making these look dynamic and interesting. You also occasionally slip into capturing contours rather than the directional flow of a form. I made note of particular ones in the drawover below. As for arms... I hear you. A trick I use is to look for the back of the arm and for the hard edges of the wrist to help me decide how it works. See the drawover, expecially the first one. I try to connect the shoulder into the arm using rhythms that "catch" one another. Sometimes it's just one rhtyhmic C curvel like in #2 but often it's an S curve from the C of the shoulder. And lastly, you get the relationships pretty well, but watch out for angle changes. The last one is a toughy from behind, but if you get the tilt of the shoulders relative to the hips right, the rest works out pretty well, as they do in the others you did. Hope that helps!
Ben Whitfield
Ugh. I'm really not happy with how I did with this project. I am a beginner drawer especially drawing figures. I really struggled with this project. I tried to keep my lines to the 16 - 17 Michael is teaching and found that really challenging. Also, I don't think I really understand how to properly identify the curves of the spine. Nor do I really understand how to properly identify the direction of the cross contours. These are 4 of my first attempts and will continue to do more over the next few days but decided to upload some today. Lot's of practice and watching the lessons is needed for sure.
Josh Fiddler
See my critique of the 5 for the direction of wrapping lines/cross contours. Remember! Everything lives in 3D space. If things are confusing, slow down and think about what direction the form is moving in space, whether you are looking up at it or down at it. Regarding the spine, the lines aren't exactly the spine, but imply how the spine is pushing the torso. In the case of the cervical line, how the neck moves in space as it connects to the back. The line isn't exactly the bones in every case. Sometimes it coincides, like in a side view for example. I know that's not super helpful starting out, but consider them as rhythms that describe how the form moves in space, the forces that keep the body in this asymmetric configuration rather than an anatomical feature. Keep going! I feel your disappointment, but don't be discouraged. Time and practice. Time and practice.
Ben Whitfield
Here is my attempt, not sure if I did this correctly.
@vange
1mo
Hi Ben, The middle E needs a line to vanishing point and the two middle's of the B need lines to the vanishing point. your lucky you have only 3 letters in your name :)
Ben Whitfield
Here is my proportion chart plus notes I took from watching the lesson. Course is great so far
Ben Whitfield
This was fun! Here are my level 1 sketches. I feel like I did ok but did struggle with some of the top/bottom of the heads. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. Off to watch the demos to see how I did.
Ben Whitfield
After watching the demo I noticed I struggled with convergence. Any suggestion on how to see that better when looking at a face?
Guille Ibanez
In the video, you mentioned that after completing the construction phase, you should reduce the opacity to add details. However, when working traditionally with pencil and such, do you create your initial construction lightly and then apply darker details over it? Thank you.
Ben Whitfield
Great question. I'm interested in knowing the answer to this as well.
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