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@benjee
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7mo
added comment inDemo - Hierarchy of Importance Line Weight
I tried both I don't personally know if the shadow is good or bad here but tried my best :)
@benjee
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8mo
Asked for help
The Penguin was the hardest for me the others get better as I moved forward.
Great work ! I enjoy the penguin the most, as you expressed yourself through different lines, trying to find the right one without being scared of the "bad lines". Try controlling a little bit more the weight of your lines, to darken what you want people to see, as it will hide the one used to find the desired shape ! And keep up the good work, you definitly got this :)
@benjee
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1yr
Asked for help
The boots was nightmare I was terrified for at least for a 30 minutes. I cannot grasp on the proption and the locations. The propotion is off on the snail as well. Anyway tried my best :D
You could check importante points and compare them like how mucho the head pf the snail is going off the shell, and alll that, but noche work, only have tonrecommend you use longer lines,keep Up the good work😬
@benjee
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1yr
Asked for help
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1yr
Hey there! Good job! I would just recommend to keep an eye out for the light halftones alongside the core shadow separation. In that area, you would have some values about your level 3 as the lights start to transition into shadow.
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1yr
Hi there! Nice job. In the future, it's easier to provide a critique if the image of the drawing is taken from a straight-on view. Since this picture is skewed, it's hard for me to tell how much the proportions are off. Even though proportions aren't a part of this assignment, it's still good to get into the habit of documenting your work in the best way possible.
