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Tommy Pinedo
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26d
added comment inDemo - Depth and Form Line Weight
I decided to continue practicing lineweight for depth and form. I went back to my previous drawings before I enrolled to proko. I redrew my OC wings with what I learned so far.
Left image: Before I enrolled to proko.
Middle image: Using depth and form, wanted to show the wings are in front.
Right image: reference.
I am ok with it, feedback is always welcome!
@acorn9
25d
If comparing the two, it seems like on your second go, you captured the proportions of the original more accurately. The variation in the line weight does help add to the depth effect as well.
Tommy Pinedo
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1mo
Left: before demo
Right: after watching demo light and shadow.
By far the hardest exercise to me compared to the hierarchy of importance. I watched stan demo twice to understand how he is choose his line width and saturation. I tried my best on the second attempt, something just feels off to me, what do you guys think? feedback is always welcome! :)
I see the shadows on the head coming across much more vividly on the second attempt. Looks great!
Tommy Pinedo
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1mo
Left: 1st attempt before watching demo. (Hierarchy of importance exercise.)
Right: 2nd attempt post demo.
I loved this exercise because:
1. it switched up the learning from sketching to now only worrying about linework to practice.
2. Seeing the difference before and after watching the demo. After writing down some notes, I returned to the drawing and did it again. I can see the difference and its amazing how much I learned from this single exercise.
Feedback is a welcome :)
Your second attempt looks great. It appears to me that you really shifted from a fixed to variable line weight, and it looks much more dynamic.
@acorn9
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1mo
Asked for help
I suspect that I missed something with this exercise. Off to watch the demo for the “ah-ha” moment…
@acorn9
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1mo
Asked for help
Well, I think it’s fair to say I was too focused on getting it right v. thinking about the subject and expressing that through more expressive lines.
@acorn9
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2mo
Asked for help
To keep myself honest, I’m posting these. I had to redo the boots a few times as my brain refused to let go of its own idea of how laces should look and let me just draw what I could see on the paper.