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Heyo Jack
2yr
might be misinterpreting some shapes of the triceps. The separation of the long head looks a bit curious to me on this model. Also perhaps losing a bit of the proportion and perspective when drawing out the gesture. :)
@younchen
2yr
2022/10/17 Here is my assignments. critique plz
JASON WILLIAMS
2yr
Trying to find the right balance between curves/flow/rhythm and structure/straights. I feel like I'm probably still a little too far to the curvy side.
Thieum
2yr
Great job! Very good gesture and rhythm I think. And the structure is there too.
Marco Sordi
3yr
2021/9/11. Hi all. This is the assignment for the example n.3. Thanks and have a good day.
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Nice work Marco. You've made the triceps look very clear, and for the purpose of showing that area, it's good study.
My feedback is more of a personal opinion and has more to do with the drawing itself, rather than the anatomy, so keep that in mind:
I feel that the shift from the rendered muscles to the non-rendered area on the right side of the arm (picture wise) is a little sudden. This has nothing to do with the study, but I think making the transition from rendered to non-rendered could've been a bit more gradual. It's a bit better on the left side of the drawing, all the way down.
I hope you find that useful :)
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3yr
Nice!
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