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Trenton Flores
Trenton Flores
Arizona
Digital Artist
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Zenas
Had fun with this project and did it few times. Did not always stick with the task but had fun. and my proportions went off bad sometimes (edit: after I saw the drawings of other people, I feel kind of embarressed)
Trenton Flores
Hey, @zenas, LOVE that you went beyond the assignment and tried a range of subjects to draw. I think that's super courageous, and it'll definitely help train and improve your eye. Great work! My main critique would be to keep working on your line-making and laying down smooth, consistent tones. Find the position that is most comfortable for you to draw and then draw with your whole arm for smoother lines. This is really difficult to do at first, but with some practice it really helps! Don't be afraid to hover over the page and "ghost" the line you want to make before you lay down your stroke. This really helps me a lot. I'm seeing some nice line work and shading in the last image of the pear, so keep on practicing! Also, don't be embarrassed! We're all here to improve ourselves, and you will definitely improve the more you practice. Good luck! Hope to see more of your work in the future.
@shvnk
First time trying the simplification. Pls help.
Trenton Flores
Hi, @shvnk, Nice first attempt! You did a really great job at getting the proportions accurate and observing where the lights and shadows are. I love the contrast in values here. The image really pops! A few things I notice: First, I would recommend practicing laying in consistent, smooth values with the pencil. I think your shadow values are nice and smooth, but your lights are inconsistent and the gaps between the strokes are clearly visible. Try building up your values with layers by starting with light pressure and going back over areas as you need to darken them. Second, try not to push down too hard with your pencil as you lay in lines or shade. Using too much pressure can make it difficult to erase when you need to adjust things, and you'll end up damaging the paper. Lastly, I like that you defined the different planes of the pear, but try not to leave any edge that is darker than the value next to it unless it is a clear transition from light to dark. Hope this helps!
Jae Hoon Jho
Trenton Flores
Hey, @Jae Hoon Jho! This is a beautiful pear. The proportions are great, and you clearly understand where the lights and darks are throughout the image. While this a really great drawing, the assignment was to *simplify* both the shapes and values of the drawing using straight lines and five values (two for the shadows and three for the lights). You clearly have a talent for drawing, so I would love to see you attempt this pear again by simplifying!
@emdrops
Simplifying ≠ simple! First attempt is the one with the shadow. Feel like I struggled to keep it simple, and was trying to race ahead. Version without the shadow is the one I tried (albeit very quickly before work) after watching the demo. Self critique on v1 is: - shadow is wrong shape - the darkest of the lights shouldn't exist in those little patches on the right - a bit off-putting - i struggled with laying in the dark background to pull out the lights in a way that wasn't distracting - overall fairly happy with the contour/proportions - getting consistent tone is tough! I *think* I managed to avoid some of the common pitfalls e.g. outlining highlights, or darkest light too close to shadow value. Do you agree? I got my partner to critique it too. Any feedback anyone else can offer would be greatly appreciated! Happy drawing, all :-)
Trenton Flores
Hi, @emdrops! Really nice work! I think you captured the proportions and overall shape of the pear really well in both drawings. I think the range of values as well as the hard edges you used clearly define the different areas of light and shadow, too. My main critique would be to take your time and trust yourself! These are both wonderful simplifications, but I actually think your first attempt was the more successful of the two. You have some really interesting shapes and great contrast throughout the drawing that really attract the eye. I think you lost some of those interesting shapes as well as some depth in Version 2 when you simplified even further. To address the points in your self-critique: - The cast shadow was definitely tough! I struggled a lot with it as well. One thing I tried was mostly observing the darkest part of the shadow to see if I could define that shape first. After that, I defined another shape around it to be the lighter edges. - I wouldn't call them "off-putting" , but the dark patches do seem to lessen the overall impact of the lighter area against the dark background. - Love the tone you used in the background. Really makes those lights P O P. - Great proportions! - Overall, I think you did a pretty good job in laying down some consistent tones! Practice makes progress, though!
Trenton Flores
These are my first passes for the pears from the reference images provided. I decided to attempt all three for this assignment since repetition helps reinforce what I'm learning and allows me to experiment a little with each iteration. To begin with something I like about these drawings: I feel that I was able to capture the proportions and gesture of the pears pretty decently. Looking back at these now, I can see where some lines could be either more or less angled, shortened, or lengthened, but overall I'm pretty happy with how they turned out! Also, even though it's technically "incorrect", I kind of like the graphic quality the darker lines that define each shadow shape in my first drawing give. Happy accident? A few things I had trouble with as I drew were confidence in my lines and shading, deciding how far to simplify the shapes, and knowing how dark/light to make each value. I struggled with how to hold the pencil to get the smoothest and most stable line, often switching between the overhand and tripod grips to see what felt best. I even placed the sketchbook on an easel for the third drawing to see if I could find a more comfortable relationship to the page. In each case, I did my best to draw from the arm with smooth, deliberate strokes. I think I began to overthink how far to simplify the shapes in my drawings. I may have broken curves down into more segments than were truly necessary. Similarly, I found myself at times unsure of which shadows and lights to simplify by grouping together. Lastly, I feel like my range of values could be improved. I wish I had defined a value scale before I shaded each drawing so that I would have a consistent range. All in all, though, I felt very good about my work. I feel like I learned a lot in the process, and I had a lot of fun while doing it! Any advice, critique, or other help tips would be greatly appreciated. :)
Trenton Flores
I have a bunch of materials around, so I wanted to take this opportunity to grab them all and compare them. I wanted to get a sense of the kind of marks I can get from each as well as how it feels to draw with them. I typically work digitally, but I think I want to try jumping between traditional and digital during this course. Looking forward to learning alongside you all!
@guywhodraws
Excited to be doing this course! Didn't want to get too ambitious with this project because I still have trouble not getting intimidated with just getting something on the page. So I just took some inspiration from this lesson and other people's assignments and just doodled some random strokes and shapes!
Trenton Flores
These are some nice shapes and forms! I can relate to feeling intimidated by getting something on the page, so great work!
William Mclean
all i have is digital so thats what im using
Trenton Flores
The nice thing about art is that you have so many options available to make it! Hope you're enjoying digital.
Ryan
Been poking around Proko and other videos for a while now, mostly on iPad. Decided to borrow my partner's pencils and get a sketch pad, give it a "serious" go. I really enjoy the high H pencils...who knew you could put down so many lines without committing! I was surprised how much I enjoyed the 2B graphite stick. Looking forward to experimenting more.
Trenton Flores
I can have a bit of a heavy hand, so I love good HB or 2H for lines that are easy to erase without leaving too much graphite behind!
@asamusam
I’ve always been interested in drawing, since the childhood, but unfortunately never really pursued it. Now it’s the time:) i have three graphite pencils — 2H, B, 8B, and also a bunch of simple colored ones of unknown hardness. I kind of like the 8B pencil the most, at least for now.
Trenton Flores
Hope you learn a lot in this course! Keep at it!
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