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@rudysterner
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2mo
added comment inProject - Dynamic Shapes
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Here is my submission as a level 1 attempt.
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5d
Nice fluidity in your shapes! While the curves are very strong, I would encourage to try incorporating more straight lines to counterbalance some of the curves and make the shapes overall more dynamic. A lot of the time, wherever a strong curve takes place, on the opposite side directly across (so for example the tummy of the seal if the back is curved) will be more straight. It's a good way to find the change in the shape as the seal presses up against surfaces or twists and turns. Hope this helps!
@rudysterner
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3mo
I think you're confusing a sphere with a circle.With a sphere, all points on its surface are equidistant from its center. The contour you drew are correct, but they mainly show the 3-dimensional quality if the sphere. The only perspective quality of a sphere is that it looks smaller as the distance increases. A silhouette will always be a circle regardless of its orientation or position. It will never be an oval. If the object you are trying to draw is a circle or disk (say a coin or an old-time record), its orientation is important. If you move around a disk, you can get a silhouette correctly represented by your middle drawing. I hope this helps alleviate your confussion.
Don’t worry about the mistake. Everyone makes them. Some of mine are embarrassing enough, that I’ll take them to the grave. Because coins and disks have some thickness, they are technically cylinders. I chose them as examples, because they are thin enough to represent circles.
@rudysterner
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5mo
I thought I would give this one a try. It's from a poster I saw a number of years ago.
@rudysterner
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5mo
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Here is my first attempt at the assingment. I numbered each of the drawings with the matching reference.
@rudysterner
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5mo
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I'm going to one of these, at least, once a week. I did this one in pencil and it came out lighter than I wanted.
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5mo
Maybe try some ink drawing!
@rudysterner
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1yr
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You are looking at my condo with a bookshelf/tv stand. This is my third attempt and I noticed that I still have line issues. A couple horizontal lines are not exactly horizontal. I might try again tomorrow after I recovered.
Yup, I think you caught the same thing I did, namely the horizontal and vertical lines not being very straight. I think that's the only thing I noticed as being more wrong. I also think that maybe the room is too long, feels like that couch is huge (and maybe it is :D )
@rudysterner
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1yr
I believe that the fundamentals course is structured so that each lesson builds upon the skills you aquired in the previous lesson. My suggestion is to continue going forward at a reasonble pace, rather than skipping ahead. At the same time don't wait until you are perfect before moving on. I'm taking the same course and I go back and practice older projects, while taking the recent lessons. It's also a good idea to do at least 15 minutes of warmups (lines, circles, etc.) before each proctice session.
On figure drawing: A beginners' figure drawing course is not a beginners' drawing course. I would probably finish the basics course. Don't expect perfection after finishing the course. That will take years of solid effort on your part.
@rudysterner
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1yr
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Here is a partial copy of an illustration by P. K. Russell. I decided to focus on the head, instead of the whole illustration. I noticed a couple of mistakes myself. But I'm interested in what other people notice. I'm going to retry after getting feedback.
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1yr
I think you did a good job capturing the shadow of the nose. As for the mistakes that jump out at me the most, when it comes to the linework- the original has a lot of sweeping, uninterrupted, confident lines in the curls of the hair, and I'm not seeing much of that in yours. As for the overall picture, the proportions are a little off- the lower half of the face is a bit elongated, and the mouth placement is a bit off. I'm sure this will be a fun one to try again down the line to really see your progress!
Candy Makowski
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1yr
Round 3. I struggled with this one. For some reason it just doesn't look right to me. If anyone has a suggestion please feel free to give a critique or advise. Thank you 🙏
I only see two areas that could use correction. First, the proportions are off. The head in the drawing is too narrow. Second, the reference is looking slightly up. The drawing is looking straight ahead.
