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Reilly Herbst
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1yr
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Here is my level 1
toni le
1yr
great :) but i feel like the 1. and 2. one the front site should be parallel, specefic the top and under
Reilly Herbst
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1yr
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I’m feeling a lot more confident with the loomis method. I’m starting to study the eyes and I want to make sure I’m placing them in the right spot. I split the brow and bottom of the nose in half and then I split that in half again. Please any advice and critiques are welcomed! Thank you
Looks great! The horizontal lines of the face should be parallel. You have the chin and nose markers going to a different vanishing point than the brows/eyes. On the side plane, you also don't have the jaw going at a steep enough angle (the part that goes from the ear to the chin). Imagine a stunt man driving a motocycle off a ramp. In the original, he goes really high! In yours, he is not getting much air. It would also be good to see an indication for the hair line and mouth
Reilly Herbst
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1yr
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I think you are really on the right track, and I really like how you are defining the form as a geometric shape. Plus I think proportions are looking pretty good. I’d say try to accentuate the “box” nature of the head. Try to draw it as a three dimensional form more than a 2d geometric shape. I did a quick draw over to illustrate (hope you don’t mind). You’ve got this for sure!
Reilly Herbst
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2yr
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Here’s my first attempt at this project! Very fun and challenging, all critiques are welcomed!
