I’m far from pro, but hopefully can provide some insight. 1 looks quite good! 2 looks like he’s floating with one food so looks less credible. 3 looks good but the gab in the right arm and the strong line weight distracts the flow. 4 the lines at the hip are too far apart so it breaks the flow. 5 a proportion error for the left leg, but mainly the 2 contour lines on the back are to horizontal straight, breaking flow.

love the whimsical nature in the first and the last one ...

As someone who hurt my wrist pushing to draw 'faster' and lost 4 years to a slow recovery that's ongoing even now, it makes my stomach twist and ache when fellow artists lament how slowly they create as though it is such a bad thing. Not only a demotivating mindset, but one that can cause physical damage to your most valuable tool: your body. :(

It looks like you’re getting it. Keep drawing more like this and it will get easier. The only thing I notice here is minor. The back looks a little too round. I think it would look more dimensional if you flattened the back plane little bit. and to post with the ‘asked for help’ sign, just click the ‘post as help request’ checkbox when you post. It can be buggy at times and not show up. You can also tag me or @Melanie Scearce. We are Proko Community Critiquers. Here to help the students.

Most of the homework I see on here is greyscale, so I get excited when I see color. This is a fun page. The guy in the bottom right stands out the most to me. The black hands makes him look like he’s wearing black gloves.