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Ari a
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25d
added comment inHow to Analyze Gesture in Art
I wanted to ask for a feedback. Do I do it right? I'm not sure about it. Also I don't know if I should use a pencil or a black ink pen. According to drawabox we should only use black ink pen but I don't know what's better.

Rafael
24d
I am also doing drawabox and NO YOU SHOULD NOT ONLY USE BLACK INK PEN. Those instructions are for the drawabox challenges ONLY, and they explicitly say you can use whatever you want outside of those challenges, even encouraging you to explore other mediums.
Rafael
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1mo
Asked for help
I would love some feedback, i feel like im having trouble with the more stiff poses (especially first 2) and maybe a bit with proportions
Have attached my gestures for the images given, i havent attached the other ones ive done because there might be issues with copyright :)
I’m far from pro, but hopefully can provide some insight. 1 looks quite good! 2 looks like he’s floating with one food so looks less credible. 3 looks good but the gab in the right arm and the strong line weight distracts the flow. 4 the lines at the hip are too far apart so it breaks the flow. 5 a proportion error for the left leg, but mainly the 2 contour lines on the back are to horizontal straight, breaking flow.
Rafael
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1mo
Asked for help
Is the goal here to memorize the proportions? And are we meant to be able to do this from memory?
Rafael
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1yr
Here is my attempt, any feedback is appreciated! I did have a lot of trouble with the laces and I kind of rushed the right boot but otherwise I think it came out pretty well
Rafael
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1yr
Asked for help
Attempted the pear, any criticism is appreciated 👍🏻
I still have a long way to go