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Shelley Plunkett
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1yr
added comment inNeed Critique!! (Robo Bean)
I think they all look good except the last pelvis may have too much of an anterior tilt, she looks a little more upright than yours, but NOT by much.
@michaelbrixx
1yr
I see where you're coming from!I tried to exaggerate the form but I guess I might have went overboard. Thank you for the feedback!
loes roos
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1yr
Not sure completely, but I feel that with the ladies you give them a bottom part that is about twice as thick as their chest (no breasts included). I think that in this model the width of the back and the width of the pelvis area (not adding too much of the buttocks yet) is nearly the same. The waist is thinner.
Thank you for the feedback! So I guess I need to make my drawings more proportionally accurate? I guess since Stan said in the tutorial videos that "The pelvis on a female model is wider than the males" I took that advice and ran with it. I felt like I needed to properly display the difference in models, but I went overboard. I will try and draw the proportions more accurate to the reference itself!
Steve Lenze
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1yr
These are actually pretty good. The one thing you need to pay attention to is how wide some of the planes are, in particular with the pelvis. Also, make sure you are accounting for the tilts forward or backwards of the torso.
I did some sketches to show you what I mean, I hope it helps :)
Thank you so much! I think that is what has felt “wrong” for me! I felt like I wasn’t fully capturing the forms and now I can see why, i appreciate it!
Hello, I’ve been doing some robo beans and I need feedback. They just don’t feel right to me. I’m mostly concerned about the angles of my pelvises, are they correct? Should I exaggerate these forms more? Is the perspectives of the boxes correct? Feedback is definitely appreciated!
Hello! I recently got a drawing tablet and did the landmarks assignment in the figure drawing course.
i only focused on the landmarks themselves and didn’t bother with anatomy since this is a figure drawing course. Could I get feedback on my landmark placements?
Steve Lenze
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2yr
Hey michaelbrixx,
I did some quick sketches to show you some of the things that I noticed in your drawings. Mostly, you need to focus on the corners and structure of your ribcage and pelvis. I hope this is helpful :)
Thank you! I focused to hard on making ny drawings look exactly like the references! I have moved on to the robo bean to learn more about the structure of the pelvis and torso, I’m hoping my errors here will be improved with the knowledge I will learn in this next lesson, thank you for the feedback, I’ll be back for more drawings soon!
Hi! These are some of my attempts on the landmark assignment. I posted on here before, but didn’t get any feedback. I’m hoping to get some this time! I feel I struggle with capturing the subtleties of the figure, I’m hoping the other lessons in this course will help improve my structure!
@michaelbrixx
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2yr
Asked for help
Also sorry for the image quality I’m not sure why the images deteriorate like that.
Hi!, started the landmarks lesson and did some drawings. The back is difficult and I’m still not 100% on my placements of my landamarks. Also my proportions are definitely not the best but I’m trying to get better at them! I only really did the landmarks so sorry for the lack of anatomy (also this isn’t an anatomy course so…) anyways critiques and feedback is appreciated!
