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Caden Young
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15h
added comment inProject - Learning to Sketch from Observation
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any feedback is welcome as always
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14h
Woah cool style!
Nice lines!
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18h
Great use of varying line weights in this. Your lines look amazing! You did a great job simplifying overall. There's a lot of movement in these because they are very curve dominant. I think that is a really interesting stylistic choice. It sort of reminds me of old school animation style of the 30s -- bouncy and loose. If that's not what you're going for, introducing more straights into the mix can help add structure and temper some of that looseness. Too many straights though will make your drawing stiff. You could try experimenting with the mix of curves and straights while simplifying and see how it affects your drawing.
Caden Young
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3d
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I started this course a while ago but took a pretty long break so I'm just going to restart. Any advice/critique is welcome :)
@bonnieblue
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1yr
HELP PLEASE! OK so I'm all confused after the spooky live stream video. I need a concrete definition & comparisons between contour, gesture, & rhythm please. Thank you for responding
Heya! I was also confused a bit over the difference between gesture and rhythm, but the way I think about it is this:
Contour: Just the outline, like if you were tracing an arm its only the exact lines along the outside (While it sounds like the best in theory because its the most accurate, it looks weird a lot of the time because it feels stiff. We use methods like gesture and rhythm as a way to help solve this, even if at first glance they both look like contours.)
Gesture: A way to show movement that can come in many forms. It could be a single line that shows the direction an arm's going, or two lines to give a more 'accurate' arm but not too worried about the individual bumps. You could go further with more complicated lines like one curved one s-shaped to get even closer to the real shape of an arm but no matter what the focus is still on its big movement
Rhythm: Extremely close to gesture because it still focuses on the broad, sweeping movement, but is now extra concerned with connections and flow. Going back to the arm, you could split up the arm into the upper arm, forearm, and hand and it would still show the 'gesture' or 'movement' but it would still feel really stiff and disjointed. To help with this you look for ways that all of the parts connect. This is where it gets difficult because it's different for every pose. In some poses, there's a nice 'rhythm' or 'flow' or one 'big, simple line' from the upper arm to the forearm into the hand, but other times the elbow is bent. Sometimes there's one really big, cool (sometimes invisible) line or 'rhythm' from the top of the head all the way to the toes, but most of the time it's not that easy. Finding a rhythm is really about finding the biggest possible connections in each pose in as many places on the pose as possible, but it's hard because a lot of the time it doesn't follow the 'outline' or 'contour' but goes 'through' it in places you can't see it.
Hope this helps :)
Caden Young
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2yr
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Man this one was fun! I wonder if it matters what step you add the gesture line is because it works better for me to get the shapes in first keeping the gesture in mind then adding the gesture line in later, and then adjusting the shapes to add to the flow. (The first few I tried gesture line first and on the last drawing I drew it in later)
Here's a few I did just now but I plan on coming back to do more later.
Caden Young
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2yr
Second attempt after watching the video! Think I got the distinct edges between the values better this time.