Proko - Jerome

My latest exercise. Hopefully it is better than my previous drawing in this lesson. What I already know is that circles at difficult for me as it shows... Also still trying to have more energy on my lines. Getting there with practice. Also proportions need improvements. I think there will be lesson(s) on that later on. Thanks for the critiques.

Melanie Scearce

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1mo

You're making great progress, this is the best one yet! Keep striving for those loose, light lines.

Jerome

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2mo

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Here is an attempt. Feedback please. Thanks!

Jerome

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2mo

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This is my second attempt of the penguin. Again, it is a bit too big for the page. But I have improved I think. Otherwise, feedback is welcome. Thanks

Jerome

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2mo

Hello. Any feedback please?

Jerome

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2mo

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Please help. I was not able to fit the entire penguin on my page. :-( Any advice? Thanks

Melanie Scearce

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2mo

Try making a couple marks to indicate the top and bottom of your drawing before you start, and only draw within those marks.

Jerome

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3mo

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I draw my cat for a practice but will do the other exercices too for that lesson. Feeback please. Thanks

Rachel Dawn Owens

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3mo

This is a very cute cat drawing. Nice work simplifying the shapes. You stuck to long, smooth lines, which is wonderful. I notice that the face looks a little flat. I think the next step for you might be to consider the 3d forms. Think of the head as a ball and wrap the face around that to give your drawing more depth. The eye closer to the edge of the head should be a bit more narrow than the one closer to us. That is all. Thanks for sharing. Your cat looks very soft.

Ann

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3mo

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Here’s my attempt at the snails and the boots! The boots were really overwhelming, especially with the shoes shoelaces. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!