Nice attempt! One thing to note, I think your lines are a little too clean. They don't have the sketchy quality of "thinking with your pencil so to speak". It feels like you've tried to go more for line accuracy than "exploration". I would say you've gotten closest with the penguin. Loosen up your arm and try to find the larger shapes before you get into detail. I would definitely check out the critique video for more details and demo!

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